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No Letting Up

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 16th, '09, 18:53

i'm not letting up at all or setting up walls because i don't regret my fall
it helped me get up - i saw no hiccup in what happened - now standin tall
i have been, to never settle is my call, i'm ready to quit my campin
cuz i can pick up from flaws, that is really better than hitting a dead end
so instead of being the villain, i'd rather live as a brilliant veteran for the long haul
i'm willing to accept it, still i'm installed in this buildin until you're appalled
fulfillin my feelings, not killin civillains cuz we are, it seems, held under a spell

(do you wanna share?)
(how can you bare?)
(gotta clear the air?)
(live your nightmare)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No Letting Up

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 16th, '09, 18:55

Your writing style makes me want to cream my pants.
Great drop man :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: No Letting Up

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 16th, '09, 18:56

hahaha, woopsies!!!!!!!!!! thanx for that TMI pal, i have that kind of effect on ppl :shifty:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: No Letting Up

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 16th, '09, 19:40

MC Anonymous wrote:Your writing style makes me want to cream my pants.
Great drop man :y:



lmao!

that was wiked man, i liked the rhyme scheme goin on , complex and fun to read
sick shit
Peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: No Letting Up

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 16th, '09, 19:43

thanx for checking this out with ur input...now i must vanish... :D
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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