The Power of Words.

[MC Anonymous]

Walking in the hallways of death, I begin to systematically pay for breaths
counting how many days are left, the rhymes even start to slay my cleft
I'm adept, readjusting my flow, busting to glow, even trusting my foes
the time is now, the seconds go, I'm crying..life's just thrusting to grow
a punisher, God looks down at me, frowns and me, even clowns my need
people always piss on me, so I'm so surprised that I haven't drowned in pee
in the town of C, singularity within me, tranquility between conflicting souls
reflecting tolls, bouncing in my mind, images begin to start depicting coal
duplicate, eliminate, disintegrate, participate, all words deafened to my ears
pain lessened by the years, here's a lesson for your fears, words are weapons and spears

Violin strings, piano chords, rifts and keyboards, are my double edged swords
words are spores in the blood stream, blood boils, now look at your main core
the pains more, yet passion is amplified when the camp is dried in your eyes
realize, we can entice minds , words go through the ears to where we store lives
where fate's door lies is unknown, depression wraps around us and poisons our bones
I've selectively chosen the tones, now I am prone to dissociate into a darkened zone
where nobodies home, nothing is known, ideologies of heaven and hell are thrown
a disregarded clone, alone, with no one who knows him, to the wayside he's thrown
no matter how well it's shown, I will never see the light, or even free my fright.

Perhaps my soul has developed a dark side
inside I've developed a cold, mean shark side
my barks wide, I'm alive, but I'm really dead
healing bred, another bullet to my own head
instead of rhyming, I'm steadily dieing, trying
to stop crying, denying any type of timing
cause' with every second that's gone, my life is gone
I'm but a mere pawn, and I die when it's dawn
life isn't bright, tonight is my sanctuary
I can't thank you any, you always made my life scary
you were never caring, I hope you burn in hell
even if I have to turn a spell, I'll end you well.

[SajN]

I loved the first part. I think it had better rhyming and content.
But 2nd and 4rd was also really good. 2nd ws better than 3rd lol.


I love the beginning in the first part.
And thank you for not using words that I don't know



Sick

[MC Anonymous]

I loved the first part. I think it had better rhyming and content.
But 2nd and 4rd was also really good. 2nd ws better than 3rd lol.


I love the beginning in the first part.
And thank you for not using words that I don't know



Sick

[SajN]

shit, I meant 3rd, not 4rd

[Emadyville]

The flows on all three of these made it hard to read, and the rhyming was just idk, not your usual shit, this one didn't impress me that much coming from you.

[MC Anonymous]

The flows on all three of these made it hard to read, and the rhyming was just idk, not your usual shit, this one didn't impress me that much coming from you.

Sorry, I was just trying to release some emotional shit when I wrote it.

[Emadyville]

The flows on all three of these made it hard to read, and the rhyming was just idk, not your usual shit, this one didn't impress me that much coming from you.

Sorry, I was just trying to release some emotional shit when I wrote it.

Yeah not sure why I just didn't really feel or like this one. Shit happens lol can't impress everyone all the time. Glad to see your still writing a lot tho.

[Ka0t1c]

The flows on all three of these made it hard to read, and the rhyming was just idk, not your usual shit, this one didn't impress me that much coming from you.

ditto.

[Solace]

Perhaps my soul has developed a dark side
inside I've developed a cold, mean shark side
my barks wide, I'm alive, but I'm really dead
healing bred, another bullet to my own head
instead of rhyming, I'm steadily dieing, trying
to stop crying, denying any type of timing
cause' with every second that's gone, my life is gone
I'm but a mere pawn, and I die when it's dawn
life isn't bright, tonight is my sanctuary
I can't thank you any, you always made my life scary
you were never caring, I hope you burn in hell
even if I have to turn a spell, I'll end you well.

I only read that part, and thought it was quite well. Not complex, i flowed to it well. Good rhymes man, keep it up. I promise ima check those other 2 you posted later

[Purple23Haze]

keep cryin bitch!!!

[James R.]

keep cryin bitch!!!

The shittiest line in this is about 80 times better than the best thing you've written here so far. Shut your whack ass up

[Purple23Haze]

keep cryin bitch!!!

The shittiest line in this is about 80 times better than the best thing you've written here so far. Shut your whack ass up

AND I SAY FUCK YOU PSSY BITCH SUCKA FISH SUCK MY DICK FUCK STICK DUCK SHIT I might slaya shit

[Purple23Haze]

who me or MC I'm a miss

SUCK MY DICK

so your a tranny now

WHAT?