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Fuck It.

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 00:10

Words are inscrutable, lines are rude and true,
This untalented bitches' dreams aren't pursuit-able,
They're shoot-able, shot them down with no remorse,
Show my force, bitch try to even show me to court,
I ain't supportable, more like reportable,
Bitch I was meant to be, you were abort-able,
I'm a bad sport, no sugar coating involved,
Kid into angry teen, I'll show your kids how to evolve,
Problems unsolved, pissed off at my friends,
Pissed off at the world, pissed off at the trends,
I've been blinded, wouldn't mind if I were rewinded,
Never glad, never liked the world, never took it kindly.
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Re: Fuck It.

Postby neversnooze » Jan 17th, '09, 04:58

fuck it , good multies and flowed well, i liked the first 3 lines with -able it was creative :wave:
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Re: Fuck It.

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 05:20

neversnooze wrote:fuck it , good multies and flowed well, i liked the first 3 lines with -able it was creative :wave:

Thanks man i was wondering when someone would check it out lol. :happy:
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Re: Fuck It.

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 17th, '09, 13:05

i think it's good . i liked it .. keep it up dude .. :y:
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Re: Fuck It.

Postby Solace » Jan 17th, '09, 17:33

z_em wrote:i think it's good . i liked it .. keep it up dude .. :y:

Thanks :happy:
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