Fuck all yall

[Purple23Haze]

Hows this for structure fuckers
All yall is straight cock suckers
All you birds flock over my words
Your called MC’s stalkin my verse
Causing a burst in my pants
I’m cumin off all those rants
Instead of layin’ I hold stance
yall act like you’re holdin hands
Better off not knowin your dads
Cause he’d probably beat the shit out you for lickin my ass

[Solace]

horrible lyrics, title doesnt make sense (y'all= you all, so your title means Fuck all you all, lol)

But finally i can read it clearly. Good job on the structure. If you put your other pieces like this, they would be probably really sick.

[Robbie G]

Lines are too short, so it ends up being too simple.

[James R.]

Good structure. Best you've ever written.

[Solace]

Good structure. Best you've ever written.

and it only took him 10 years to do it