Yall is soft

[Purple23Haze]

You soft and as yellow as mustard
buster I muster so much I must of
Left you in the dust bruh now shut the fuck up
You kats is phillies spillin’ ya guts
Emotional and straight silly as fuck
Don’t let me be the one cutting ya up
Cause if I do know it gon be rigid as what
My rhymes my skills my craft
it’s war fucker I’m bringin’ my axe
Battle the whole stacked status
eat some bodaggits faggits
The world is on my back like ATLAS
Strong Giant…TITANS CLASHIN
The battle of the microphone outlastin’
Yall so hurt for structure you bout taxed it
ASHES to ASHES and dust to dust
Real knows I just fuck shit up
I wish I could see it when you readin my stuff
I can’t wait to see ya pictures, I’m gonna be bustin up
Probably looked all disturbed, like ya just busted a nut
The wizard took a shit word
and turned it into flippin’ the bird
Flippin this boat, look skipper

They don’t all float or flow this moat bout reads what I wrote


FUCK some mother fucks
FUCK some mother fucks

[Solace]

Pretty simple man, im glad your keeping up the structure fix, but now you just gotta improve the rhymes. Really the only decent line in that in my opinion was "The world is on my back like an atlas"

[Ka0t1c]

i agree, work on your rhymes and make them in understandable english