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IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 19th, '09, 19:58

Who wants it? I'll explode with the pyro flow, watch me glow
man your stop watch is slow, words causes ya crotch to grow
you can't time greatness, my flow is a mine matrix, mind encasement
replacements are evasive, sedatives can't stop this aggressive placements
of letter induced dope withdrawals, the rapper with golden balls
erase and stall, I got 40 broken brawls I swiped with olden claws
break through walls, boundaries? I hound these with sulfur bullets
when I pull it it ignites and explodes, along with skin tissue through it
so even few hits prove to be deadly, I can kill swift and steady
I'm ready, I bred these with plenty of lyrical density, so tempt me
pent up rage fueled with a page, cued by a mage, pyro explodes
I write with text nodes, and I detonate so the paper can implode
a lyrical menace, I make all my biters see a dentist, I'm ruthless
so if ya bite, I'll make yall toothless, knock ya out with the true fist
don't be clueless, or get massacred with the fiery blue mist
who else you know that can do this?

circulate, articulate, communicate for the sake of hate
eliminate, disintegrate, regurgitate, and break the slate
hallucinate, incriminate, and formulate to take your fate
before the weight, just desecrate, and conjugate, to make things straight. x2

Shotgun blast makes ya run fast, grind with lyrical degrees
IVY League can't keep up with this disease, try to appease
or please, I'll shatter your knees, splatter ya pleas, who needs
true seeds? those refugees who grew trees will die for they greed
got blue blood, you shootin' with duds, I'm suitin' for mud, death and war
every breath that's bore is sore, ribcage torn, blood dressed it's core
in worn fabrics, write lyrical tactics, in an attic actin' like a rap fanatic
a practical addict, nomadic and sporadic with a flow like the titanic
rhymes makes ya eyes panic, got a revolver, a mind dissolver
problem solver, my caller called Sir Alexander so he can maul birds
appalled were these kinds, bound to rhyme, blinded to die
founded off lines of lies, based off cries, as I kept my mind sublime
away from fallacy, yet all I see is MC's with empty meaning
Hip-hop is bleeding, they're receiving, and we witness the seeping
fight back with bright tracks, send it right back at these fools
my gene pool is surrounded by residue of nitroglycerin engine fuel.

circulate, articulate, communicate for the sake of hate
eliminate, disintegrate, regurgitate, and break the slate
hallucinate, incriminate, and formulate to take your fate
before the weight, just desecrate, and conjugate, to make things straight. x2

Follow the leader, a deceiver with liters of blood I borrowed from ether
your sorrow is weaker, I flashin' like air beacons, planes are the receivers
break wings, take things, smash and bash, crash land in prairie grass
metal and broken glass, hope emotion lasts, drink the ocean off my past
keep in motion as I fast, pray the mass of hate osmosis' to equilibrium
I drink two lithium's, vibe, then I see through you like I see through helium
quartz crystals sizzle my skin, raw energy, rhyming with such intensity
only a pen I need to make the paper bleed, and form evil words such as these
a paintbrush with seeds, plant them, and watch as the letters grow with ease
kinetically gifted so I flow with E's, condensation makes my bullets freeze
pull it please, make my day, but don't take away, otherwise I will kill you
trust, it's something I will do, I'm a skilled dude in the hustle art of pill-fu
basement covered in mildew, cobwebs on my microphone, a micro zone
my art surrounded by psycho clones, and I desperately try to hide my own

circulate, articulate, communicate for the sake of hate
eliminate, disintegrate, regurgitate, and break the slate
hallucinate, incriminate, and formulate to take your fate
before the weight, just desecrate, and conjugate, to make things straight. x2
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 19th, '09, 20:02

SLMacDougall wrote:fuck, you've totally fallen off. this was WACK...

(is what i can't wait to say)

but that day will never come...

once again 10/10

Thanks man :y: :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby SajN » Jan 19th, '09, 20:16

Very sick, very sick :y:
I agree with the Dougall guy, I want to say that you're wack :(


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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 19th, '09, 20:17

SajN wrote:Very sick, very sick :y:
I agree with the Dougall guy, I want to say that you're wack :(


10.3/10

:flower: :flower: I'll be whack when my fingers are smashed and i can't think anymore.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 19th, '09, 21:22

SLMacDougall wrote:
SajN wrote:Very sick, very sick :y:
I agree with the Dougall guy, I want to say that you're wack :(


10.3/10


looool

;)
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby Solace » Jan 20th, '09, 02:25

Man that was fucking sick, need more people to check out this shit. You made some funny lines here and there, like that pill fu line. Keep up that sick work, only problem I found was that I couldn't flow good to the third verse but you probably flow fine to it ;) 10/10 man, keep up the good shit :worship:
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 20th, '09, 02:30

Epiphany wrote:Man that was fucking sick, need more people to check out this shit. You made some funny lines here and there, like that pill fu line. Keep up that sick work, only problem I found was that I couldn't flow good to the third verse but you probably flow fine to it ;) 10/10 man, keep up the good shit :worship:

Thanks man :flower:
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 20th, '09, 03:59

SLMacDougall wrote:read it properly now, u need to record it, its really good.

Thanks man :y:
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby James R. » Jan 20th, '09, 04:52

Cosign on MacDougal. This shit was amazing man.
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 20th, '09, 13:24

Thanks James :flower:
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 20th, '09, 16:57

your style is amazing, you definitely help me "see" more within words you use which helps me write better, thanx :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby mcZu » Jan 20th, '09, 18:43

This needs to be recorded. Flow was flawless, just some minor points but thats just 'cause every person flows it different. Lyrics were sick, loved the last verse :y:
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Re: IV- The Requim.

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 20th, '09, 20:43

mcZu wrote:This needs to be recorded. Flow was flawless, just some minor points but thats just 'cause every person flows it different. Lyrics were sick, loved the last verse :y:

Thanks man, and I agree that every person has their own unique flow. :y: :y:

Kaotic wrote:your style is amazing, you definitely help me "see" more within words you use which helps me write better, thanx :y:

Damn man, that is one great compliment! I'm glad my words open your mind for new ideas! The way I write is meant to stimulate, and you saying this helps me know that i am completing my goal! :worship:
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