Marking My Territory

[Ka0t1c]

sorry that your favorite rapper is takin vacation
while i'm creatin more chapters and makin rotation
cuz a break aint what matters, it's stayin awake and
train to get better before you're placement's the basement

yeah i'm raisin like banners cuz this space i'm invadin
although i'm facin the pattern, i am erasin frustration
from my patience i've gathered but my age aint so ancient
but rather well painted from greater adjacents (people near me)

i am an unrated free agent whose level's unmeasured
let me explain what i battle, several occasions i handle
a mess of equations, one example: abrasiveness fellows
that behavior translates to abandonment, follows my plan unrelated

so my case isn't mellow cuz damage inflated my ammo contained - i'll
remain in the shadows til Hell's out it's cage and i awake from my cell
oh, Kaotic says hello, i remain a psycho this day and no way they will let go
of my main frame, i can't settle, maybe i'm contained here, stayin forever
on flames in my kettle waitin to echo, may God save you, if at all

*only i myself can find a passage (go away)
i can't rely on help, no signs or message (come and stay)
but blind i've felt, inside are questions (die)
survival's dealt by reminders present (why)

[Ka0t1c]

i fixed this piece up and renamed it

[MC Anonymous]

Again another great drop, although the rhyme scheme was very awkward, i was able to follow.

[Ka0t1c]

yeah, i got that awkward style, check the Rockford files
cuz since i was brought up a child, i have walked long miles
now i wanna smile cuz i watch my money pile
my life's becoming wild like some crocodiles!

[Arabian Shady]

yo the flow was off man, not exactly impossible to follow but some readers might have problems, oddly enough structure was maintained! its all good tho cause subject matter is the shit
Peace

[Ka0t1c]

yo the flow was off man, not exactly impossible to follow but some readers might have problems, oddly enough structure was maintained! its all good tho cause subject matter is the shit
Peace

thanx, but where was the flow off for you?

[mcZu]

Flow was on-spot imo, I could follow it, lyrics were nice, rhyming was nice
Overall a nice piece Kaotic

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i fixed it up, i found a few fractures in there right away, my bad

[Arabian Shady]

yo the flow was off man, not exactly impossible to follow but some readers might have problems, oddly enough structure was maintained! its all good tho cause subject matter is the shit
Peace

thanx, but where was the flow off for you?

it was there, cant find it now....

thanx, i fixed it up, i found a few fractures in there right away, my bad

thats why ,lmao!

yo can you feed my verse from the competition man? i wana see where i went wrong , its called "Underlying Reality"

[Ka0t1c]

haha, thanx for checking this out! now feed me more, me want coooookie num, num, num, num, num!

[Slim Zaddy]

i think this is dope piece man .. i liked it , good shit ..

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, i appreciate it

[James R.]

I really enjoyed it and didn't have any problems following this. Good job man.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checkin this out James, i'm glad u did