There I stoppped spamming epiph

[Purple23Haze]

No shit, I know I don't have a college degree I'm the one who told you that dick tective
Damn I feel like I'm in a forum with snitches bitches and a bunch of pigs in a blanket
BTW epiph you brought me into the shady babie diss by well you know so shut the fuck up

I gotta a whole forum against me interesting
Go ahead oppress me, shit don’t stress me
But um I’m suggesting you get off my nuts
Unless you wanna blubber fuck gutter slut
I just had an epiphany now that bitch is history
You don’t know the first thing about me FUCKO
Lets talk about bursting bubbles cuddles
I don’t retro fit to your ass in a sack of shit
“Thall shall not cast stones” Jesus of Nazareth
Yea yea I’m blasphemous but your ass is ration less
I really don’t need nor now want your respect
But come correct don’t flex or get eject into another mess
I was the one who told I have no degree so whats next
You gonna internet pimp slap me you’re the best

[Robbie G]

That was actually decent enough.

But come on dude, it's the internet. Just enjoy yourself and relax and if you get too upset over a stupid thing like this than you should leave.

[Purple23Haze]

That was actually decent enough.

But come on dude, it's the internet. Just enjoy yourself and relax and if you get too upset over a stupid thing like this than you should leave.

I agree dude and I just want to be better so thank you

[James R.]

You're making strides to becoming an average writer. The beginning was lame, the middle was actually ok, then you ended it off extremely lame. The structure was that of a normal human, and the flow was pretty held together through most of it I guess.

[Requiem]

^definite improvement, i can see.
but u still reak of epiphany's bowels.

[Solace]

I thought it was slightly below average but not your worst, definitely an improvement. Decent flow and structure is keep so keep up at that. And as Shady Babie said, if your gunna get upset over little things then you should leave, and i think its good that you said you agreed to that Apart from that, no i wont shut the fuck up cause just making a little joke in one of my posts saying you suck is just what i think. Your beginning good but you really suck for some whose been writing for 10 years (unless you were joking). And just cause you told us you lied about having a college degree doesnt make it any better that you lied. You really think if a person admits he murdered another person to a police that theyll let him off with a warning? Nah didnt think so.

but u still reak of epiphany's bowels.

LOL

[Purple23Haze]

I guess i thought it okay to lie since I am attending college. But the truth with that is all I'm gonna get is a certificate unless I step up. As far as ten years goes trust me when you get there you'll feel it, not as sharp passionate or inspired. I've bounced between structure and just letting it flow for the microphone, but I'm still pretty new I've only been writing ten years it's my therapy. Thanx for the honesty though!