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EM's Soldier beat (parody)

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EM's Soldier beat (parody)

Postby survce » Jan 21st, '09, 18:31

Clever cause I dug and migrated my funds
Clever cause I generated hundreds, fifties, twenties, and one's
Stand not in debt above a killin for makin a million
Look to finish what I could can and still feelin
Till I stick out my dent to correct and I hint to consent
Leather wraped to rebet cut my head
Spent forty f**kin G's bust a key for my crew
If you only knew what I do everyday in the two
Understand that I'm for real the part of master plan appeal
If you can match the prints then I think its safe to say that we got the deal
Make'em all wishin' that they facin' and listen
By the time I get done they be pissed off and hissin'
If you kill it grill it you can then chill it to heal it
They be wishin' with they tuition appeal
And so the frustration that you see will build
LOVE
EVOL
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Re: EM's Soldier beat (parody)

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 21st, '09, 18:39

Clever cause I dug and migrated my funds
Clever cause I generated hundreds, fifties, twenties, and one's


this part was good, the rest of it seems rushed and a lot of it doesn't make sense to me
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: EM's Soldier beat (parody)

Postby Arabian Shady » Jan 21st, '09, 18:59

Kaotic wrote:
Clever cause I dug and migrated my funds
Clever cause I generated hundreds, fifties, twenties, and one's


this part was good, the rest of it seems rushed and a lot of it doesn't make sense to me



exactly that was the only part that fit the beat, rest seemed gibberish
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: EM's Soldier beat (parody)

Postby Solace » Jan 22nd, '09, 00:25

how was that a parody?
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