4 Walls

by **mcZu** » Jan 22nd, '09, 15:32

Wrote this on the Joe Budden beat -4 Walls-. It's something different, not my usuall style.
Feedback would be appreciated.

4 Walls

Waking up looking up at my ceiling
I can actually hear the sky screaming
It brakes apart when I stand up and walk
I can’t hit the brakes when I start to talk
This gap in my heart is sucking me up
Like a black hole between the shining stars
I feel like I’m locked up behind these bars
Inside these four walls like a padded room
Can’t describe this feeling I have for you
I can’t describe myself like ‘’who’s Zu?’’
Can’t find the door to my heart and to you
I can see you, hear you, smell you and almost
Sense you…… But these walls interfere due
The fact that I can’t say those three simple words
It has a verb which fills up my heart and soul
But I can’t place the pronoun inside this hole
My heart beats to the extend of losing fait
My mind might explode when I take the bait
My soul took flight when she landed next to me
Looking for her up high while she was down with me
Feeling like an antecedent coming before the clause with no L
Ceiling stops closing in on me…… when I heard the door bell
It was she, I could feel her presence inside my chest
See the queen and me the king like we were playing chess
Only difference is that the Queen is the most important factor
These walls have no door so how am I supposed to attract her?
Should I just smash my way through and break my surroundings?
My sound is sounding sound proof but around my head it’s loose
‘Cause I can’t get to her even though she is there
Pause the reality and she if I can pas the atmosphere
Four walls, no doors, no windows and a glass ceiling
Maybe I should just try to explain to her what I’m feeling…?

by **Slim Zaddy** » Jan 22nd, '09, 15:56

this is way sick man , really loved it all , rhymes and lyrics are great nothing to mention more . it flowed very well to me and the concept is great though, over all it was a dope track . keep droppin homie .. :y: