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NEW Anonymous!

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 23rd, '09, 02:02

Burning desire got me wired, retired for spewing fire
pyro admires the lighters as the eyes I've come to sire
numbed with wires, veins pumped through needles and liquid
to feeble to stop this, my brain is toxic, sad and timid
dimmed for creation, simplified for the detonation of life
then my nation will strike, attack with full blown fury and strife
enough games, time for tough flames and rough lanes of insane
propane induced names, for pain I use my will to hunt my shame
and slice radio waves, propagate my lyrical tapes to generations
to better stations when another rapper like me drops nuclear radiation.

Erase facial features like corrupted windows batch files
I dispatch wild air pilots, have them clap like cracked tiles
my words are visual like textiles, letters real like mail man
I summon the hail then, make the shit hit the fuckin' fan
shredded to snow, condensation crystallizes the blades
slice off your braids, make ya dome freeze like ice escapades
that's twice you played, like playing poker with a 2 of spades
there's still 4 cards he gave, 3 players to see what hand he made
you're bland and slayed, like snow when slid down by kids
I attack, make ya have a seizure like you came down with SIDS.

I awoke in a pitch darkness like light has sung evil tones
I'm a feeble clone, no soul of my own, blood I'm shown
I have grown, yet lyrically I stay balanced in suspension
with violence I may mention, twisted in dimensions
early detection is critical, for a disease of impurity
the sin's surely me, because it must be either you or me
I'm blue I bleed, who I need, is those who understand
in a wonder land, a grand stature is right under hands
embers land, bloodshed and agony embrace moral laws
for a second my quarrel stalls, just so it can see me fall.
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 23rd, '09, 02:13

woah me likey...great shit dude 10/10 as usual
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 23rd, '09, 02:17

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:woah me likey...great shit dude 10/10 as usual

Thanks man :y: :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby Dark Blue » Jan 23rd, '09, 03:08

this is great i would give it a 9 outta 10 or 10 outta 10 :y:
HATERS If you worked your dreams like you do your mouth - things would happen for you
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 23rd, '09, 03:44

shadybaby101 wrote:this is great i would give it a 9 outta 10 or 10 outta 10 :y:

:y: :y: :flower:
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 23rd, '09, 05:15

I think that is tight ass hell but I don't think your real with yourself!!!
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby fresh.d » Jan 23rd, '09, 06:01

i agree put this shit on audio it would be a waste if it just stayed on paper. :y:
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby James R. » Jan 23rd, '09, 14:52

Word. Needs to be on audio asap *hasn't checked audio yet to see if it's already there*
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 23rd, '09, 18:17

I thought it was a good read, the middle was kind of tame compared to the rest of it but didn't take away from the piece that much :y:
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Re: NEW Anonymous!

Postby mcZu » Jan 23rd, '09, 18:36

Not bad, I enjoyed reading it. Kinda agree with Rain, the second part was a lil´less. But it still fitted quite good with the rest. Nice piece :y:
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