My Full 16

[Ka0t1c]

these words you speak i've heard before
but yours are slurred so learn your chore
you aint ready for beef, you're more a herbivore
while i've been on the streets servin war

in my world you're bleak, adjourn this floor
cuz it's too early freak, you're not the first i've warned
you're a germ to me to curse our forum
it's an emergency to nurse the swarm

thru surgery i work til foreign's
i'm certain's ceased or i'll store 'em
by quarantines, no disease disturbs the norm
most importantly i earn my aura

cuz from the worst i pieced back order
you won't emerge to breathe like water
and as do Smurfs, you'll be that color
cuz the turf Earthlings, i'd think you'd honor

*my full 16, come bring your armor
just know you'll sink, extinct down under
my foes' instincts were kinked, a bummer
to those who link in sync by numbers

[Rain Matrix]

rhymes are their and definitly compliments your use of vocabulary... overall a decent piece

[Ka0t1c]

thanx man, does this mean you're back for good?

[mcZu]

Loved the vocab you used for the rhymes, overall a nice piece man.

[Ka0t1c]

i'm glad i wrote this too, but right now i can't type anything up

[Ka0t1c]

thanx Scott

[James R.]

As said above, rhyming and vocab were spot on. Made it very easy to follow and enjoyable to read. Good job

[Ka0t1c]

thanx for checkin this out

[MC Anonymous]

these words you speak i've heard before
but yours are slurred so learn your chore
you aint ready for beef, you're more a herbivore
while i've been on the streets servin war

in my world you're bleak, adjourn this floor
cuz it's too early freak, you're not the first i've warned
you're a germ to me to curse our forum
it's an emergency to nurse the swarm

thru surgery i work til foreign's
i'm certain's ceased or i'll store 'em
by quarantines, no disease disturbs the norm
most importantly i earn my aura

cuz from the worst i pieced back order
you won't emerge to breathe like water
and as do Smurfs, you'll be that color
cuz the turf Earthlings, i'd think you'd honor

*my full 16, come bring your armor
just know you'll sink, extinct down under
my foes' instincts were kinked, a bummer
to those who link in sync by numbers

Hahahah yes! You took my advice and your skill level rose because of it. Excellent way to implement multies, you did a fantastic job. First time I gave a 10/10 to you. Keep it up bro

[Ka0t1c]

WOW i'm glad i got you on my side... thanx for the 10, i'll continue doing stuff like this from now on if i can

[MC Anonymous]

WOW i'm glad i got you on my side... thanx for the 10, i'll continue doing stuff like this from now on if i can

Great dude.