As the winds brush against the autumn sky
raindrops slid with such an eerie glow
life glistens in the heavens oh so high
and this green linen occupies all the lows.
Colors clashing, forming a rosary of nature
and my pen shines with an ominous lore
my heart beat lies between the lines of my paper
as the letters conjugate within my core.
Twice, has my eyes dripped with liquid rage
with the frame of my body in such compression
a tapestry of life revealed in this one page
and my mind has been taught with this one lesson.
The sky holds on to my deafening screams
as the axis rotate my intimate cries
a man who once held on to his dreams
now slips and falls from the view of eyes.
Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
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Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by MC Anonymous » Jan 23rd, '09, 21:26
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by mcZu » Jan 23rd, '09, 21:32
The 4 view you got going there is sick, nice poetic vibe 
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by Ka0t1c » Jan 24th, '09, 01:53
pretty sick man, i like how u made this poetic, this is one of my fave written styles from you
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by James R. » Jan 24th, '09, 02:04
This was dope as hell man. Great poetry. Just great.
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by MC Anonymous » Jan 24th, '09, 02:05
Kaotic wrote:pretty sick man, i like how u made this poetic, this is one of my fave written styles from you
Thanks dude
and yeah I like writing like this, I just rarely do it though.LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by MC Anonymous » Jan 24th, '09, 02:08
James R. wrote:This was dope as hell man. Great poetry. Just great.
Always a pleasure for someone to feel my workLMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by Solace » Jan 24th, '09, 16:54
Man great stuff, i really liked it.
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Re: Poem, 4 Modes of Existance.
by Purple23Haze » Jan 24th, '09, 17:27
Honestly I did like it that's all I'm gonna say!
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