Mooning the moonlight lite night

[Purple23Haze]

This is my world
I’ll tell you why
Cause it’s a pearl
And I’m that guy
with a passion for Christ
A straight passion for life
passion for his people
As I paint on my easel
Lyrically I speak feeble
Spiritually I defeat evil
Seriously I leave heat though
My son one way
I’m sunning the day
Mooning the moonlight lite night
Saying the man on the moon is white
And that’s gotta be alright
cause everything I said is all right
The way may be difficult at times
But Jesus will always be there
In a frame! is the only place he’d be square
I still be rare…………………..
what’s me weakness telekinesis
I can’t achieve this
lost flow but believe it’s
Succeeded superfluous
A trooper you knew this

[Ka0t1c]

not bad, some people may complain about the structure but that's ur choice , pretty good job man

[Solace]

Improving man Lyrics were nice cept sometimes the flow went off cause you changed the rhyme scheme suddenly. 7/10.

[Purple23Haze]

Thanx epiph I'm not sure if it was this one but I even acknowledge that the flow isn't consistant I just need some beats so I can put together a song then you'll see it actually works but thank you I appreciate the feed