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Just Passing Through

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Just Passing Through

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 24th, '09, 17:12

pop a couple of Ativan That's the Plan for all my Anxieties
words can Bring Ya Paper an Innovater's the Man I Try Ta Be

this is a lyrical Attack you can bet I ain't all about The Cash
some of you might have to Adapt to my downpour Of Wrath

you see this is Him Venting a Grim Mention of his Lone Fight
my Intentions are In Question but this concerns my Home Life

I have to forget about Dad N Mom and somehow keep Rapping On
untill the day that my Passions Gone on the mic I'll be Blasting Bombs

call it a Total Blowout tell me how my Loco Flow Sounds on Audios
so Spit Your Piece and try to Trigger Me so I can finally say Audios (spanish for goodbye)
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Re: Just Passing Through

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 24th, '09, 17:20

I've always been a fan of your writing rain keep it up
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Re: Just Passing Through

Postby Solace » Jan 25th, '09, 01:33

Good stuff man :y:

ps. im pretty sure its adios (spanish goodbye)
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Re: Just Passing Through

Postby James R. » Jan 25th, '09, 01:42

I like it, but not as much as I usually do. No specific reason, just not as hard hitting as normal. And it is adios, not audios.
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