Carmen

[James R.]

Ok so this is the beat I was writing to. It's called Infinity and Beyond (should be the first track in their little player) so props to them. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default ... dID=763538

Five foot three wit some 32 C’s
Walkin round like I shoulda heard of you, please
You know me ma, the flow of the century
We were meant to be I know that eventually
You’ll be next to me, ridin with the top down
Don’t be fooled just cuz I ain’t got a lot now
Caramel chica with me colored dark brown
Long black hair, don’t even let me start now
She’s fine as hell and I could never ask for more
Threw me for a loop, I usually attract the whores
She movin to the next place, step outta my head space
We aint even caught eyes yet I gotta set pace
Touch her arm, the approach is smooth
Talk slow, leaned back like I’m sposed to do
Exchangin names “Hi Carmen, I’m James”
I’ll give you my number and you’ll do the same

Hook x2
She walks in a room and turns heads easy
She’s mine and down to ride man believe me
Gun in her hand, arm on her side
Bonnie & Clyde, without doubt Carmen’ll ride

Reminiscin on Biggie Smalls me and my bitch
Fuck you and your girl she aint seein my bitch
For her birthday I went and dropped a g on my bitch
And my apartment I went and got a key for my bitch
It’s real when she rides so I ride for her
I get to sink into heaven right inside of her
Make threats and if I think I ever heard of you
I’ll keep it simple mother fucker I’ll murder you
That’s straight from the heart and it was mutual
I got horror stories bout what Carmen could do to you
She entranced the fellas and made the girls jealous
We’d tear up the city, wasn’t nothin they could tell us
And I can’t describe the support she provided me
If I wrote garbage she’d be the first to silence me
Inspired by her presence, she was such a vibrant beat
Above everybody, I gave no one in my life her seat

Hook x2
She walks in a room and turns heads easy
She’s mine and down to ride man believe me
Gun in her hand, arm on her side
Bonnie & Clyde, without doubt Carmen’ll ride

It was sealed, no doubt, ya man was in love
Bond tighter the klan or black panthers wit gloves
Find me any problem and the answer was us
We went from punk ass wanna be’s standin us up
To havin smtn authentic, smtn y’all rented
Gangster movie love, all fun and all business
They love a taken man, I dogged them fly bitches
Guard my decisions, but God as my witness
I used to spit shit to them now I don’t visit them
Cuz they aint wanna roll til this loft that I’m livin in
Carmen was from day one, the moment I approached
I still can’t breathe like I’m holdin in the smoke
I’m high from her loyalty, relationship spoils me
Her smile just boosts me, her sad face boils me
Mentally she was meant for me this was meant to be
She was sent to me, I’m all hers til the death of me

Hook x2
She walks in a room and turns heads easy
She’s mine and down to ride man believe me
Gun in her hand, arm on her side
Bonnie & Clyde, without doubt Carmen’ll ride

[<Stiiccy>]

simply amazing...

flow was so fuckin ice cold....i love the 2nd verse...

this is so fuckin good...prolly your best piece

[Slim Zaddy]

wow james this is really amazing you're a legend in every type of writing , i can really feel and sense the emotions flowing through your verses it's really hot and it touch my heart .. rhymes and lyrics are just more than amazing and the beat is catchy and sick beside the chorus offcourse , i really wannna see this in recording section . 10.4/10 ... keep writing bro , and keep TR looks good .. gd job

[James R.]

Thanks Zach. For once I was 100% sure the flow was on point. Glad I was right lol.

z_em- Thanks for checkin man. I took your request to heart. I figure I need to stay diverse anyways right? Lol. Thanks for the compliments man they mean a lot.

[Purple23Haze]

DOPE! I find it hard to write that well about women I always try to get passionate and clever you stayed simple and clever which is much better

[James R.]

^Thanks man. I think it's pretty hard to write about girls as well. With a song like this I just thought about "what would the girl of my dreams be like" and tried to write about it. I was feeling all inspired anyways, so it worked out lol. Usually I'm not so lucky.

[MC Anonymous]

Nice shit man

[Ella]

im curious as to how you sound..

[Ella]

i imagine him soundin something like Tupac? Lol but i could be so wrong..

[James R.]

Lol thanks for the feed peoples. Naw Scott it's not about anyone. And according to maybe I sound like a mix of Nas and Pac. Nothin like TI lol. I'm from the north.

[Ella]

oo i was close "something like Tupac" Lol
i can picture Pac sayin this.. sounds really good

[James R.]

Thanks a lot ella

Thanks for the feed Leesus Christ. I'm honored to have your holy ass feeding my songs.

[James R.]

^Send me a beat and some verses and I'll drop however many verses you need bro