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Night Rambler

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 22nd, '09, 08:27

since i am nocturnal it's prolly my turn to
spit what i feel in my internals that is real and eternal
cuz i have a gift fer this world
plus i'm gettin referrals from my friends
so this journal entry i send's universal
because i was meant to contend
and never adjourn until my mission's a win
but whatever's my term, only matters the end
i won't miss out again, i'm willin to stem
cuz sittin on the bench, that hurt more on me man
than i have ever planned, i was pissed off, i'd grin
now shit's hit the fan, i'm like an Eminem
i do understand there are millions of Stans
but when the mic's in my hands my skills do expand
i'd kill any clan cuz i'm wild, don't deal with a champ
cuz you see that i'm amped, it's my time to demand
using my mind to command the fire they spread
over miles of our land they're tryna deny me from sprouting but death
hasn't found me just yet, i'm messing with boundaries
but i count on the ref to tell me if i've fouled out at bat
am i walking down the alley where the devil sets booby traps?
or am i always one step ahead, my duty's set in stone
and i'm ready to roam, pursuing my quest
through all the bullshit they cast
Last edited by Ka0t1c on Jan 26th, '09, 21:17, edited 2 times in total.
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby survce » Jan 22nd, '09, 09:28

:y:
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 22nd, '09, 13:19

that's is sick , i really liked it . lyrics and rhymes are just perfect , and i love the concept.. flow was pretty nice too . good job here .. bro .. keep da heat up :y:
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 22nd, '09, 13:23

thanx, i was just feelin like writin something up last night so this came to mind, glad u like it :)
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 21:18

anyone else...PLEeeeaSss??!
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 01:16

z_em wrote:that's is sick , i really liked it . lyrics and rhymes are just perfect , and i love the concept.. flow was pretty nice too . good job here .. bro .. keep da heat up :y:

My thoughts exactly
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Re: Night Rambler

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:18

hell yeah! :worship:
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