Dreams

[MC Anonymous]

Stay strapped, rhythm mapped, planetary energy
sent to me, bend my knees, just to disperse enemies
hold on tight, bold to sight, hidden within corridors
slit the strife, with this knife, spittin' lethal metaphors
detonate, sent my hate, in the form of syllables
kill all eyes, spill the cries, this power is tillable
break insight, take my life, jump off very easily
drown in pain, frown in shame, death is only teasing me
weaken me, believe in me, throw me in a burning hole
a yearing soul, the sands are bold, slipping in this turning coal
average this, savage list, ravage all the lower dirt
gettin' pissed, damage shit, carnage with the slower spurts
who want's some, crew got guns, lyrically I'll murder you
purposeful, surface full, of papers filled with cursive too
end this verse, pen does hurt, hand is really cramping now
asking how, take a bow, walk outside with sweaty brows.

Atmosphere, gats are here, to penetrate with lethal force
Ozone layer, no one cares, end the hate from feeble whores
sun will burn, guns will turn, humanity starts to melt
stunt our growth, grunt and mope, reality hung by belts
stab my back, grab a pack, start to smoke your life away
stupid fool, putrid tool, heart breaks to the strife today
live my life, giving twice, karma drags against my skin
why to me?, fighting these, patience really wearing thin
anger pains, danger frames, a picture of my bitter end
Die a son, the final one, lay right next to Hitler's bed
burn in hell, turn and yell, no one really hears you scream
prison cells, crimson spells, someone tell me this a dream
fucking die, ducking lies, wiping all my tears away
here today, I will stay, until my end does come in ways

[MC Anonymous]

Best line is in your sig

At night from a satellite's view the city's a heart
the red and white blood cells are the lights on cars- Canibus

but still very nice

. . . lol

[Solace]

Really nice stuff man, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme there Good piece man!

[MC Anonymous]

Really nice stuff man, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme there Good piece man!

Thanks dude, it flows perfectly with the beat I picked for it.

[Solace]

Really nice stuff man, I enjoyed the rhyme scheme there Good piece man!

Thanks dude, it flows perfectly with the beat I picked for it.

Oh yeah and about the flow, it flowed really well with me (unlike other pieces of yours with long lines).

[James R.]

I'm feelin it man. Flowed very very nicely and the rhyme scheme was very enjoyable. Good job brohemian