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Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

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Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 04:50

my heart is open and the darkness is far away
so now i'm startin to notice tomorrow and the following days
i'll work harder with motives and stay smarter - i'll play
stronger, you'll know that as i target the market i may
as an artist display my art i convey to the others who say
don't argue, he's Ay star forever always, never takin a part
from the things harmin our ring, we're ready for change
he's armed here to bang, his armor's his strength in numbers
a powerful rank amongst us who wants to be thanked but doesn't
we wonder how strange he's a lover yet suffers from pain
greater than any of us, that's tough to explain, stubborn's his brain
til he uncovers his aim, he shelters out thunder and rain
holdin us under his wing, it must be tough to maintain
yet it's just his hunger, it bubbles his veins or prolly a monster
will come in to reign all the terrain and constantly claim
like a mobster members to his gang like it's his hobby and game...

i am not God, nor will i be but i see what i can ignore so i'm free
and tho i go towards the key of course i'm flawed as a mortal being
but something more we could solve if the majority would agree
what's worth more than these rewards, is it peace or's it war which we need?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 26th, '09, 05:26

your work seems to be a reflection of you and as an artist you can't ask for anything more your lyrics on this weren't as complex as I've seen from you but well placed and poetic none the less

keep writing my friend
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 06:12

yeah, i was going more poetic on this than rapping it, i also wanted to keep it simple so it's familiar, like more understanding, less complicated
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby gutawafang » Jan 26th, '09, 06:15

Your vocab rocks man.
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 06:24

thanx to you both, and yes Scott, that could happen
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 00:52

Very poetic, but very understandable (two things that don't always go hand in hand). Vocab was great. It was just a great piece overall man. Good job.
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Re: Peaceful Means But War is to Bring

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:06

thanx James, i appreciate that comment :worship:
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