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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 20:47

I'm a poet usin my words in my music to influence the earth
so that you too can pursuit a good future and i'm sure
to shoot me with bullets more than a few would
cuz they think i'm full of ludicrous terms to Google
but my world's not humorous, at work i do war, that's my duty
the reward is truly absurd, have i ruined my turn to lure in some humans
when will we learn we're still duelin, fueled by our foolishness
who's through with this, i'm a lunatic losin it like a fugitive, should i adjourn?
well, my blueprint is built from numerous, how could i still be only called studious?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: abnormal

Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 01:07

This was pretty good, not your best though. Mainly because the rhyming isn't as tight as it normally is. Not that it's bad at all, but like earth and sure rhyme when you spit it, but not as perfectly as your rhymes normally do like cat and bat (not that you're that simplistic, but you know what I mean)
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Re: abnormal

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:15

that's partially the reason why it's called abnormal
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Re: abnormal

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 27th, '09, 01:16

James R. wrote:This was pretty good, not your best though. Mainly because the rhyming isn't as tight as it normally is. Not that it's bad at all, but like earth and sure rhyme when you spit it, but not as perfectly as your rhymes normally do like cat and bat (not that you're that simplistic, but you know what I mean)

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Re: abnormal

Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:19

ok, i'm not sad about this tho, it's just an experiment
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