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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 14th, '09, 07:31

this forum's my portal to explore more and open my stored wisdom
cuz there is a force within me to tell my story and it's origin
well there is no pen, i am just really brainstorming, ignoring pretend
while i'm pouring for friends what's important to them and of course me
no one can quarantine my mission, i won't abort even when corners i'm pinned in
cuz what i've been born to exhibit will not be ignored or hidden
and until war is forbidden i shall excel with ambition
cuz i was born to be listened to, oh i sworn i'd be different
so written on this form are my many lyrics without limits
coherent to spirits who appear with the privilege to live by good principles
from each of my pivots, now i submit to you the beginnin, i call it the big preview...
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 26th, '09, 21:30

like it, hate it, what's ur opinion? :confusion:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 01:23

I like it man. Very solid piece. Nothing wrong with it, but nothing outstanding at the same time though.
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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:36

...yeah, i guess it's just a filler
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 01:46

You dig yourself a hole all the time. I mean I've seen you write some of the sickest shit in hear, so I hold you to that standard lol. It's rough bein good man
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Postby Ka0t1c » Jan 27th, '09, 01:51

haha, that is so true...ehh :sweating:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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