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Next To Be Recorded

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 27th, '09, 02:49

Props to Tomega for supplying me the beat. Should have this done soon.

Get blessed with the vexed hex, checked next
with the text, blacked, cracked like virgin sex
lyrical slaughter, author of death, life drainer
knife painter, preacher gets tainted, so later
my behavior, is accounted for like bankers
tankers get smacked faster then perv wankers
lyrical masterpiece, beast in the east with teeth
for rippin' pieces of fleece and skin at least
no peace, Iraqi style bombs, guns and shit
puns will hit, punchlines fluid like spit
Tomega blessed me, guess he didn't know
my flow so gold, when it shows it glows
nasal passages with fumes of nuclear waste
taste my spaces, hopscotch over ya face
racial sorcery tortures me, my skin turns white
burns bright, light revives, brings back life
despite knives, I pierce chests with daggers
faster then gravitational pull and laughter
lyrical disease, appease the pleas please
smoke trees, drink antifreeze, die a sleaze
life is now, death is later, rotten saviors
gotten sabers, slice my chest with razors
bring the pain, strain my name to fame
slain the lames, fire to tame my brain
nothing to gain, a lyrical orphan, no one
mystical totems, open my minds colon
imagery, seeing me, is like a refugee
escaping free, but caught by his greed
my words are abortions, kids are killed
filled with skill, condensed into a pill
drink the substance, crazy, tasty
pasty, enough to make you hate me
lately, I've been judging my own habits
have it, 300 ounces, pray like sabbath
murder this beat, Capella is my ego
a hero, a giant in realms, write with biro's
lyrically inclined, to time mind's rhymes
50 bars a line, otherwise you will die
sliced and diced, twice for being nice
seeing ice, is like dissing me with spite
trading sides, saving lives, you die
I cry, lifes goes on while I slice your eyes
Pain will fade, when I'm in my grave
enslaved, not bathed, paved in waste
end of this, I'm straight pissed, fate kissed
my wrist, insisted that I should slit
I'm done with it, guns will split my dome
shittin' bones, and die a clone.
Last edited by MC Anonymous on Jan 27th, '09, 22:17, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 02:54

Dope piece man, cant wait to hear it! Flowed well to me, nice rhymes too! :y:
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby Emadyville » Jan 27th, '09, 06:14

I love how you switched the style and flow and shit up, rhymes were nuts, i wanna hear this shit asap :y:
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 27th, '09, 16:58

Thanks dudes. :y:
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby mcZu » Jan 27th, '09, 22:02

Your gonna grace Tomega's beats, especially 'cause your imrpoving your flow. :y:


But it's Tomega right?, Not Tormega?..lol
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby Tomega » Jan 31st, '09, 16:26

looks good man.. can't wait to hear the final result
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Re: Next To Be Recorded

Postby gutawafang » Jan 31st, '09, 16:40

Record this. :y: :y: :y:
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