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NEW - The World

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 01:46

Ayo...Vendettas, vices, a fight is just aggression,
Physically masked, causing kids to get arrested,
Violence, murders, influenced by the media,
More deaths than the amount of words in encyclopedias,
To get beat and punched especially for no reason,
Every Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, every season,
Kids bleeding, psychos raping, life is ruthless,
Things get out of hands, from smacking to shooting,
The genesis of war, started with simple arguments,
Can lead on so far, it just destroys all my confidence,
Most spirits wish to live, but living just wish to die,
They live to die, many just living a lie,
See right through the eyes, translucent happiness,
Cold hearts overshadow bliss, what kind of crap is this,
I just sit down, relax and watch this world burn down,
Reminisce, just think of the things you just learned now.
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 27th, '09, 01:49

Epiphany wrote:Ayo...Vendettas, vices, a fight is just aggression,
Physically masked, causing kids to get arrested,
Violence, murders, influenced by the media,
More deaths than the amount of words in encyclopedias,
To get beat and punched especially for no reason,
Every Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, every season,
Kids bleeding, psychos raping, life is ruthless,
Things get out of hands, from smacking to shooting,
The genesis of war, started with simple arguments,
Can lead on so far, it just destroys all my confidence,
Most spirits wish to live, but living just wish to die,
They live to die, many just living a lie,
See right through the eyes, translucent happiness,
Cold hearts overshadow bliss, what kind of crap is this,
I just sit down, relax and watch this world burn down,
Reminisce, just think of the things you just learned now.

Very Very nice. Very good. You improved ever since I told you to write emotional stuff.
I know what I'm talking about :y: :y: :flower: 9/10
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 01:50

MC Anonymous wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Ayo...Vendettas, vices, a fight is just aggression,
Physically masked, causing kids to get arrested,
Violence, murders, influenced by the media,
More deaths than the amount of words in encyclopedias,
To get beat and punched especially for no reason,
Every Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, every season,
Kids bleeding, psychos raping, life is ruthless,
Things get out of hands, from smacking to shooting,
The genesis of war, started with simple arguments,
Can lead on so far, it just destroys all my confidence,
Most spirits wish to live, but living just wish to die,
They live to die, many just living a lie,
See right through the eyes, translucent happiness,
Cold hearts overshadow bliss, what kind of crap is this,
I just sit down, relax and watch this world burn down,
Reminisce, just think of the things you just learned now.

Very Very nice. Very good. You improved ever since I told you to write emotional stuff.
I know what I'm talking about :y: :y: :flower: 9/10

Thanks man :) Glad you see improvement in my writings, I want to be real (as you already know).

PS. You on MSN?
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 27th, '09, 01:50

Epiphany wrote:
MC Anonymous wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Ayo...Vendettas, vices, a fight is just aggression,
Physically masked, causing kids to get arrested,
Violence, murders, influenced by the media,
More deaths than the amount of words in encyclopedias,
To get beat and punched especially for no reason,
Every Spring, Summer, Fall, Winter, every season,
Kids bleeding, psychos raping, life is ruthless,
Things get out of hands, from smacking to shooting,
The genesis of war, started with simple arguments,
Can lead on so far, it just destroys all my confidence,
Most spirits wish to live, but living just wish to die,
They live to die, many just living a lie,
See right through the eyes, translucent happiness,
Cold hearts overshadow bliss, what kind of crap is this,
I just sit down, relax and watch this world burn down,
Reminisce, just think of the things you just learned now.

Very Very nice. Very good. You improved ever since I told you to write emotional stuff.
I know what I'm talking about :y: :y: :flower: 9/10

Thanks man :) Glad you see improvement in my writings, I want to be real (as you already know).

PS. You on MSN?

Yes I am. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: NEW - The World

Postby James R. » Jan 27th, '09, 02:02

Anon summed it up. You're gettin better and better every fuckin day man. I'm glad to witness the growth.
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 02:04

James R. wrote:Anon summed it up. You're gettin better and better every fuckin day man. I'm glad to witness the growth.

Yay :) It means a lot, thanks :y:
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 27th, '09, 09:41

that's dope man ,, i really loved it ... keep it up .. bro :y: :y:
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 14:10

z_em wrote:that's dope man ,, i really loved it ... keep it up .. bro :y: :y:

thanks!! :)
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Rain Matrix » Jan 27th, '09, 15:51

this was good read very interesting and deep
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby mcZu » Jan 27th, '09, 21:53

Enjoyed reading it man :y:
Keep up the good work
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Re: NEW - The World

Postby Solace » Jan 27th, '09, 22:08

Rain Matrix wrote:this was good read very interesting and deep

Thanks bro :happy:

mcZu wrote:Enjoyed reading it man :y:
Keep up the good work

Thanks for reading, I appreciate it :happy:
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