Lookin Out (expand your mind)

[Ka0t1c]

i'm lookin out from within unsure of how to begin
so i'm searchin for help to descend cuz right now i'm not in
is it from doubts to extend myself to my friends or am i fallin again?

i'm not about to pretend this route that i've been
followin has no faults, understand but i can't call a forfeit
and halt cuz probably then i never would win, what the problem's my plan

i have felt really grim, my challenge at hand's
to rebound when i'm pinned into boundaries, dead ends
won't down me, i'm sent to install my wisdom, i'm countin on my talent

presentin my power i print to solve the Devil's intents
so always i'm cautious, i'm proud that i've encountered the monsters like him
i'm not exhausted, i've spent a lot thru my body to amount up to someone, resultin

an uncommon, awkward structured substance no other's touched yet
because i'm at the tip, my function's to disrupt the corruption
which was meant to become us, instead it's amongst one organism

[SajN]

Long lines, but it's good.
Not your best piece I've seen though.

I know you can better

[Ka0t1c]

i didn't mean to post it, i meant to save it because this piece aint done yet so this is my accidental leak you could say

[SajN]

haha
Too bad for you

[mcZu]

I liked it man, nice way of rhyming.
But ever considered dropping longer verses or actuall songs? 'cause I've only read like halve verses or just a couple of bars. I would love to read a complete songs

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Sounds pretty good so far man, can't wait to check the rest.