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Postby Mr.Maximum » Jan 28th, '09, 06:35

just a random laid back verse i did, tell me what u think.

VERSE

just talking, to hear myself think
where did your meds go? i threw them up in the sink
every one of us have our habits and kinks
but fuck it lets just smoke and have a few drinks
i dont want to argue, you know what i want to do?
get high and drunk till i'm sick and i puke
your hanging on my shoulder, i dont even know ya
trying to make out the shapes the sqaures circles an ovals
i'm a little off, a little wrong, and a bit to on
diss me expect me to respond? you should not
i'd diss maximum before i'd waste my time on ya
write about your lack talent? nah give me marijuna
kick on back,rip all tracks, spit obnoxious raps
your coughin on the gas,i light a match watch it catch
yes sir, ive returned its absurd every verse
cant even keep up i keep switchin it up ya heard
You mothafuckin' chickens ain't brave enough
To say the stuff I say, so just tape it shut
-EMINEM-
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Re: new shit

Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '09, 07:06

It is easy for me to relate to. To me it's more like a verse in a rap battle than a verse in a song. Know I'm saying?
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