II'm going to start writing in here, Tell me what you think

[theJFKshow]

The backbone of society aches
In our final days we'll want to rewind these tapes
Cause behind these blank faces of vile and hate
Is a fucking ugly cover up of our mistakes
Now wait
Just give me my two seconds of fame
That's all we really need now a days cause society's changed
No longer do we grow up from birth to serve
Today we get by using hurtful words
So in the rebirth of our earth
When you can hear the sound of a thousand cowards
Quickly coming clean in their final hour
Like 9/11, when Reverends weren't in there helping
They were outside on mobile phones promising heaven
To office workers and janitors who weren't put on this planet to
Clean fucking toilets and talk shit on their manager
They were put on this planet to live
So until the ending I will be living this gift


I thought this up walking home from class this morning

[MC Anonymous]

Wasn't very impressive, but it wasn't bad either. Much better from a lot of these new comers in here. You could structure things a little better, maybe add more multies here and there. Content inside as in subject matter was good, flow was painfully average. Overall I'd give it a 6/10. Keep writing

[Ka0t1c]

not bad but not great, i agree it's a 6/10