Thug FreeStyle

[Slim Zaddy]

Using Z enigmatic..ultrasensitive satelite aparratus for status,
My brain waves see storms coming before it happens,
Wise'll spit so much it creates tidal waves when I spray,
They pick up pens, pencils & paper & carries them away,
When i got something to say just release saliva from mouth,
& voice echo's to bring clouds & start pouring on tha mounts,
Tha way I prenounce my vowels makes tha current alil urgent,
Dropping massive boulders down& in one breath it'll turn it,
Coasting through tha waters motion as my mouth moistens ,
One of my flows or spitsin time go together & form tha ocean,
My verbal knowledge turns solids into a huge liquid mess,
Tha fuckin undertow 'll bring ya toes under taking away ya breath,
Acting like jesus on tha tops of lakes steadily walking miles,
Then holding my own fighting off & slaughtering crocodiles,
Cuz I rule tha ocean when I'm flowing freestyling or posting,
I can quench tha thirst of dessert throats that was toasted,
Its like a fucking army of H2o particles that can't even harm me,
Forming words thats scarring mothafuckers with speeds Psunamis,
Laying out tha waterworld from beneath making pond dunes,
& Then wiping tha shit away easily with forces of monsunes,
Turning light to dark swimming with anaconda's, boa's & sharks,
And leaving shit worse off..then tha aftermath of Z ark!,

[Solace]

Really good freestyle, good flow for me, good vocabulary too! And nice rhymes. Keep it up z_em

[Slim Zaddy]

Really good freestyle, good flow for me, good vocabulary too! And nice rhymes. Keep it up z_em

thanks shadymademe , glad you liked it bro ..

Really good freestyle, good flow for me, good vocabulary too! And nice rhymes. Keep it up z_em

i agree with this, i love reading your pieces

thanks bro , much appreciated

[mcZu]

Loved the flow, nice vocab, rhyme pattern was sick aswell. For a freestyle it's fire

[Slim Zaddy]

Loved the flow, nice vocab, rhyme pattern was sick aswell. For a freestyle it's fire

thanks mczu ,, glad you liked it

[gutawafang]

Cuz I rule tha ocean when I'm flowing freestyling or posting
I can quench tha thirst of dessert throats that was toasted

I liked that part the most. And yeah man. I relate to this.

[survce]

Props!! My brother from another mother

[Slim Zaddy]

Cuz I rule tha ocean when I'm flowing freestyling or posting
I can quench tha thirst of dessert throats that was toasted

I liked that part the most. And yeah man. I relate to this.

thanks man , glad you relate to it ..

Props!! My brother from another mother

thanks bro ,, loving your comment ,, .. glad you liked it

[Ice_Scarred]

Its a dope piece man. I have 2 admit, this is lyrically crack, and keep it up dude. But one question is as to why you named it Thug freestyle?

[Rain Matrix]

I liked this for a freestyle it's pretty good, I look forward to seeing more form you

[Slim Zaddy]

Its a dope piece man. I have 2 admit, this is lyrically crack, and keep it up dude. But one question is as to why you named it Thug freestyle?

thanks man glad you liked it ,, ,for the name i dunno it' comes on my mind just like that .. thanks again

I liked this for a freestyle it's pretty good, I look forward to seeing more form you

thanks Rain , much appreciated ,,

[James R.]

This is a really good quick drop man.

Dude you've come SUCH a long way. You're officially one of the people that I expect nothing less than excellence from. Even when you slip you take advice to heart and come back 5 times harder with your next track. That's what I love about you man. Good job with your progression man. You're a name to check for in Creative Writing. Real talk.

[neversnooze]

damn Z this was awesome, every line backed the one before it. the way you described the rapping with ocean and water was amazing. each time you post its better than the last. it was somewhat poetic too, you know you have my full support

[Slim Zaddy]

This is a really good quick drop man.

Dude you've come SUCH a long way. You're officially one of the people that I expect nothing less than excellence from. Even when you slip you take advice to heart and come back 5 times harder with your next track. That's what I love about you man. Good job with your progression man. You're a name to check for in Creative Writing. Real talk.

thanks James , that's mean alot to me homie from a legend like you , nd i'm so glad that you see an improvement in my writing ,, much appreciated ,, i won't disappoint you

damn Z this was awesome, every line backed the one before it. the way you described the rapping with ocean and water was amazing. each time you post its better than the last. it was somewhat poetic too, you know you have my full support

thanks neversnooze , nice to see you back on track bro ,, i'm happy that you liked it ,, i wanna see somethin new from ya .. so commin ,, thanks agian bro