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fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 30th, '09, 01:57

fuck you
fuck him
fuck this
this shit
the end!
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Re: fuck this shit (new sticcy verse)

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '09, 01:59

Dude that was shitttttt :n: Last line was pretty funny, so was the mommy hit it thing. But if this was a verse you meant to be taken seriously about then naw this was bad. Bad rhymes, bad puns, bad vocab etc. But i laughed a bit :y:

But i shall still bump your album :smoking: Im fucking in love with some of your songs :smoking:
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Re: fuck this shit (new sticcy verse)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 30th, '09, 02:00

Epiphany wrote:Dude that was shitttttt :n: Last line was pretty funny, but if this was a verse you meant to be taken seriously about then naw this was bad. Bad rhymes, bad puns, bad vocab etc.

But i shall still bump your album :smoking: Im fucking in love with some of your songs :smoking:

lmfao...this was just some shit i freestyled...
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Re: fuck this shit (new sticcy verse)

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '09, 02:02

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Dude that was shitttttt :n: Last line was pretty funny, but if this was a verse you meant to be taken seriously about then naw this was bad. Bad rhymes, bad puns, bad vocab etc.

But i shall still bump your album :smoking: Im fucking in love with some of your songs :smoking:

lmfao...this was just some shit i freestyled...

Its a lot better than what i can freestyle so :y:
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby James R. » Jan 30th, '09, 02:05

Hahahaha that was quite hilarious.
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby Solace » Jan 30th, '09, 02:28

this version is better.
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 05:06

That's freestyle? I mean, really? I think it's funny to be called a freestyle... :unsure:
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 30th, '09, 05:43

gutawafang wrote:That's freestyle? I mean, really? I think it's funny to be called a freestyle... :unsure:

its called sarcasim
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 05:43

XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
gutawafang wrote:That's freestyle? I mean, really? I think it's funny to be called a freestyle... :unsure:

its called sarcasim


LOL! It's funny by the way. This site's full of sarcasms huh?
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jan 30th, '09, 06:05

gutawafang wrote:
XXStiiCCyXX wrote:
gutawafang wrote:That's freestyle? I mean, really? I think it's funny to be called a freestyle... :unsure:

its called sarcasim


LOL! It's funny by the way. This site's full of sarcasms huh?

lol as if.. bro
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Re: fuck this shit (freestyle)

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 06:15

Yo X. I liked it. Blunt and to the point. It's a good hook one I'ma put in my archieve :y:
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