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Read Between The Lines

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Read Between The Lines

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 05:57

Sometimes we go so fast we don't stop and think what we did in the past
My mind starts racing I close my eye's all ways thinking
Of ways to express my thoughts on what may seem to you the fan I'm embracing
My goal is to get your attention in order for one to succeed in this life stop reminiscing
Don't play idioms like one step forward and two steps back that's wack
Mono e Mono as my motto goes "chin up! be proud of the chipped tooth and that broken nose"
All my cuts, bruises, and burns each one apart from the other meaning individually earned
Copy and paste study that look it up and tell me that wasn't ph at
Until you've held your dead daughter "RIP Baby Girl" don't come at me like THE GODFATHER
I'm not here to impress I take pride in the best set aside all the rest I respect all never less
Expect nothing in return don't talk when you listen you learn
For knowledge is power all though it don't pay by the hour in conclusion I leave you with
Read between the lines don't stress on your past cause you're wasting your time
Take this from some one who's sitting in between both of the lines
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EVOL
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Re: Read Between The Lines

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 07:29

lyrical my homie,, nice 4.5/5, reason it was 4.5 not 5,,, cause i hate reading
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Re: Read Between The Lines

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 07:38

:) Right on
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Re: Read Between The Lines

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 30th, '09, 11:34

it's good , i liked it :y:
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z_em = Slim Zaddy = Zaid AQ which is my real name
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