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childrens story i write now

Postby Slovinec » Jan 28th, '09, 06:08

Meow, the old cat says
How many others like the feeling of abstance
Nutting hard, notting fast, not even a push near the ass.
Baby kitten jake plays the drums.
He used to pop alot of E's before he cums
hes very clean,
needs about 6 drinks to be mean
But then theres garfield. fat fuck of the golden age
every half hour after he fucks, it needs to be changed
if u dont do that quick,
Say bye bye to that couch and meet your new neighbor shit
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Re: childrens story i write now

Postby Requiem » Jan 28th, '09, 06:17

WTF, there was no subject. just complete randomness, LMAO
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Postby gutawafang » Jan 28th, '09, 07:13

I've read three of your rhymes, BizarreKID.
And seriously, you do have a sense of humour! :D

Though I'm not that good myself, I think your rhymes aren't easy to flow. I can't rap them out.
Still, I wanna see more! :)
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Re: childrens story i write now

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 05:54

thanks, the only reason i write these humor ones, to me honest... i kinda copy EM, but who cares i dont try to rap, just do it when im really happy
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Re: childrens story i write now

Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 06:39

I like your humor as well. Hey you like to flow wack rhymes get the Purple Pills (Instrumental) by D12, I got alot of funny shit i can flow to that beat. :y:
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Re: childrens story i write now

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 06:52

let me wait till im under the influence of something,, maybe a extra serving of cough syrup will work
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Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 06:59

Right. Some of this best songs wrote by the artist were drug induced
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Re: childrens story i write now

Postby Slovinec » Jan 30th, '09, 07:28

damn straight, eminem, snoop doggm and man i can forget britney spears she been smoking so much, her kids are gonna have some mental issues when they grow up, but yeah mainly eminem..lol
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Postby survce » Jan 30th, '09, 07:47

You heard "You Don't Know" With 50, EM, and Cashis yet? Its of the RE-UP album. Listen to the first verse 50 don't care to admit anything.
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