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Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 20:09

Fish he comes, not to spray, he burns
He's done his sums, is what he says, he's learnt
Corrupt the slums, donates today, his earnings
Fuck the dumps, just lay, he's returning
He's trying his best to show his multi skills
He's crying out loud over his sulky feels
Over his bulky pains, it's pouring rain, he's going emo
He takes the train, in heavy rain, Fish finding Nemo
He's what-the-hell, what-the-fuck, he's probably lame-o
Darkest spell, motherfuck, he's stuck in this game yo.
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Re: Fish emerges

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 20:13

gutawafang wrote:Fish he comes, not to spray, he burns
He's done his sums, is what he says, he's learnt
Corrupt the slums, donates today, his earnings
Fuck the dumps, just lay, he's returning
He's trying his best to show his multi skills
He's crying out loud over his sulky feels
Over his bulky pains, it's pouring rain, he's going emo
He takes the train, in heavy rain, Fish finding Nemo
He's what-the-hell, what-the-fuck, he's probably lame-o
Darkest spell, motherfuck, he's stuck in this game yo.

Excellent! You've improved a lot man, good job :y: 8/10
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Re: Fish emerges

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 20:15

WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!
:happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy:

And from the bottom of my heart, thank you Anonymus for giving me free tutorials on multis! I want more lessons!!! Love you man! :worship: :worship: :worship:

:flower: :happy: :flower: :happy: :happy: :happy:

Thanks!
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Re: Fish emerges

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 30th, '09, 20:17

gutawafang wrote:WOOHOO!!!!!!!!!
:happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy: :happy:

And from the bottom of my heart, thank you Anonymus for giving me free tutorials on multis! I want more lessons!!! Love you man! :worship: :worship: :worship:

:flower: :happy: :flower: :happy: :happy: :happy:

Thanks!

Hahahaha, I like to help MC's with potential. :y: You're welcome
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Re: Fish emerges

Postby gutawafang » Jan 30th, '09, 20:18

YAY!

I'm like, so glad I have potential in the first place man! I'm so excited. It's 3 am and I can't sleep due to this excitement. LOL!
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