random abstract abnormal confusing psycho

[Ka0t1c]

random thoughts assemble, sometimes often scrambled
i guess that nothing's simple and this is just a sample
of what i've been thru, am i lost in limbo, well i've crossed the channels
which helped stretch out my antennae, so i've got the ammo
now you want the memo as to when i'm gonna open up my window and drop the anvil
u must be nimble or not get involved in scandals cuz i'll solve the riddle
if you are flawed skedaddle, i'm uncalm, dismantled from the laws a little
fuck the middle, i'd rather run at the front than handle the loss of battle
the cost to travel's tough to tackle, aint exactly a tickle where you'll laugh a lot, it's mental
all the issues equal passed a handful, one instant example, streets cause a pickle
you're tryna get to home base, waiting to light the candle, but life's no lantern Jack
you're phantom to the facts, your figure's prolly fragile, how's to face the wolf pack?

[Purple23Haze]

I felt a flow

[Ka0t1c]

thanx, i know the last two lines are hard to understand the flow cuz most of my friends read it and were like, wtf???

[Purple23Haze]

thanx, i know the last two lines are hard to understand the flow cuz most of my friends read it and were like, wtf???

I don't know when I read it, it flows I like the rhymes that you dabbled with a little which where scrambled in but still a sick flow you know those rhymes when you put them all together it was actually abstract but complex. The third time readin it was better! keep up the good work! Do me a favor check out my piece bottom feeders and tell me what ya think! Peace

[gutawafang]

nice vocab! and i liked it. it rhymes! I could rap it out!

[Ka0t1c]

Do me a favor check out my piece bottom feeders and tell me what ya think! Peace

when i get to it i will state my opinion of it...

thanx for checking my piece out

[James R.]

I like the rhyme scheme you got going on a LOT man. The thing about this structure is that you rhyme sooo much within the line even if someone can't find YOUR flow, they can pretty much mix and match and make their own which is great because that makes your message that much easier to follow. That's probably the shining attribute of this drop along with vocabulary simply because rhyming at this capacity wouldn't be possible without a nice vocab. Good job man.

[Ka0t1c]

thanx James, that is very true... i've been writing for a long time and often, and like u said, if someone misses the flow, they can pick right up with their own style or tempo cuz my vocab enables it... i love it! great feed!