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NEW - The World (EDITED)

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NEW - The World (EDITED)

Postby Solace » Jan 31st, '09, 02:31

I'ma try to record this asap, but I never get the chance. I edited it, fixed up the flow (for the beat I'm using), but its not much different than the original.

Vendettas, vices, a fight is just aggression,
Physically masked, causing kids to get arrested,
Violence, murders, influenced by the media,
More deaths than the count of words in encyclopedias,
Mothers crying, fathers leaving, people dying for no reason,
Every Spring, Summer, Fall and Winter, every season,
Kids bleeding, psychos raping, real life is ruthless,
Things get out of hands, from smacking to shooting,
The genesis of war, started with simple arguments,
Can lead on so far, it just destroys my confidence,
Most spirits wish to live, but living just wish to die,
They live to die, many just living a lie,
See right through their eyes, translucent happiness,
Cold hearts overshadow bliss, what kind of crap is this,
I just sit down, relax and watch this world burn down,
Reminisce, just think of the shit you just learned now.
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