Once Upon A Time...

[MC Anonymous]

I awoke, damage bone fragments choke my speech
broken teeth, ripped fleece, standing on ruined feet
staggering from below, rooms dark, stagnant air
no ones there, I see stairs, It's apparent that I'm scared
trip down and fall, slice my wrists on the wooden debris
smoke settles, I'm leveled, dark so I can't see me
I speak, no one hears me, get down and cry alone
the light above flickers on, suddenly I'm now in a zone
I look up, I see a man, heat in hand, looking fierce
blasted me, bleeding seeps, with a knife he pierced
my heart until I died, lungs are fried, then I appeared
with amazing fear, on my bed, sayin' I'm not here
illusionary beings, the room spins, kneeling down
feeling down, the window curtains reflect my frown
smashing with fists, asking for this life to really end
all my feelings spend, for my psych not to bend
my mind snaps, eyes widen, I rush out with force
crush all the doors, insanity has taken it's course
reality seems fake, fallacy seems real, I can't feel
numb to the bones, alone, and that sealed the deal
walked to the window, climbed on the ledge, crisp air
there is shit there, in my mind, I had nothing left to spare
a tears falls down, lands on the floor, ends with care
fist clenched, eyes tighten, heartbeat thumps frantic
my soul has no panic, for my psych is reeking havoc
voices screaming, telling me, ''Angel jump, no one's here
hold no fear, once your gone no one will despair or steer
in the direction of mourning, you know your story, jump
nobody gives a fuck, your out of luck, arms filled with bumps
scars and slices, your friends are gone, end your life
knifes didn't work, you can end it all, even all the strife
you know it, I know it, we all do, your life is a worthless cause
jump off and die, so you won't need to cry, hear heaven's applause''
So I jump off the ledge, died by death's toll, heart dark as coal
all because I was alone, and the agony finally stole my soul.

[James R.]

You're one of the few people that completely justifies a one word reply.

Dope.

I loved it man. Great flow to it, great descriptions. Really made me feel it. Good job.

[gutawafang]

Nice storytelling.

[MC Anonymous]

Nice storytelling.

Thanks

[MC Anonymous]

Damn (a real one word response cause these don't count)

haha

[Wreck]

this is really good story telling, i'm impressed.

co-sign; dope dope dope shit son.

[James R.]

You're one of the few people that completely justifies a one word reply.

Dope.

I loved it man. Great flow to it, great descriptions. Really made me feel it. Good job.

that was more than one word

I was talkin about "dope" fucker. Then I proceeded to give real feedback lol

[Wreck]

You're one of the few people that completely justifies a one word reply.

Dope.

I loved it man. Great flow to it, great descriptions. Really made me feel it. Good job.

that was more than one word

I was talkin about "dope" fucker. Then I proceeded to give real feedback lol

lmao

[MC Anonymous]

this is really good story telling, i'm impressed.

co-sign; dope dope dope shit son.

[Wreck]

this is really good story telling, i'm impressed.

co-sign; dope dope dope shit son.

I know you probably do, and your name is MC Anonymous, but I'll ask anyway

do you rap?

like seriously. Not none of that youtube shit where somebody finds an instrumental on their, and writes 4/5 lines (usually whack lines too). Nah I'm kiddin. I'm thinkin you probably do.

Collab?

[MC Anonymous]

co-sign; dope dope dope shit son.

I know you probably do, and your name is MC Anonymous, but I'll ask anyway

do you rap?

like seriously. Not none of that youtube shit where somebody finds an instrumental on their, and writes 4/5 lines (usually whack lines too). Nah I'm kiddin. I'm thinkin you probably do.

Collab?

Yeah I rap, my flow needs work but lyrically I'm on another level. add me on MSN gothik_knives@hotmail.com , we can talk about collab there

[Wreck]

Yeah I rap, my flow needs work but lyrically I'm on another level. add me on MSN gothik_knives@hotmail.com , we can talk about collab there

Don't worry bra. I heard those 35 lines, and it was enough to know you have extreme potential and are real good (you can paint a lot of pictures in rhymes, with shit similar to that overall rhyme). I need work on my flow as well but it's all good. I will hit you up on the email, but I'm in the process of saving up money & switching up money to actually get in a (real good) studio, so is it aight if we don't collab right away? I initially worked with a $100-120 home mic with good quality, but it ended up not working. The mic wasn't bad to begin with and should of been good for the price of it, but shit happened and it ended up bad. Anyways, I'll hit you up. I'm getting together tons more beats now, concepts & collabs now for later when I'm ready to go.

[MC Anonymous]

Yeah I rap, my flow needs work but lyrically I'm on another level. add me on MSN gothik_knives@hotmail.com , we can talk about collab there

Don't worry bra. I heard those 35 lines, and it was enough to know you have extreme potential and are real good (you can paint a lot of pictures in rhymes, with shit similar to that overall rhyme). I need work on my flow as well but it's all good. I will hit you up on the email, but I'm in the process of saving up money & switching up money to actually get in a (real good) studio, so is it aight if we don't collab right away? I initially worked with a $100-120 home mic with good quality, but it ended up not working. The mic wasn't bad to begin with and should of been good for the price of it, but shit happened and it ended up bad. Anyways, I'll hit you up. I'm getting together tons more beats now, concepts & collabs now for later when I'm ready to go.

Yeah man it's all good, we can collab when you get your shit. That's cool with me bro,

[Wreck]

Yeah man it's all good, we can collab when you get your shit. That's cool with me bro,

Ok cool man, thanks for willing to have patience with it. Btw, you remind me (based on those 35 bars) of a Nas type rapper, mainly something that Nas would do or would come out with. I could picture him rapping that shit, so it shows a good similarity. Keep it up bro.

[MC Anonymous]

Yeah man it's all good, we can collab when you get your shit. That's cool with me bro,

Ok cool man, thanks for willing to have patience with it. Btw, you remind me (based on those 35 bars) of a Nas type rapper, mainly something that Nas would do or would come out with. I could picture him rapping that shit, so it shows a good similarity. Keep it up bro.

Thanks dude, I'm very versatile, if you look for my drop 'Word Madness' you'll see I'm like Buddens and Canibus also.