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The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 07:36

The takeover, I'm killin you lames hard
God MC, me, James R
Aight mother fuckers Ima finish the musical
After that it's just business as usual
Epiphany cant stick wit me he's dogged to fight
Fitting name, your good at first and gone tonight
Maybe MC's should test the waters 'fore they jump in
Let the blood hounds find the lockers you were dumped in
You gettin beat by the young'n's dog you said it yourself
So for me? Just leave your whack shit sit on the shelf
Ice Killa on some bitch shit, wit lines hoe's would use
Your CD was barely as hot as frozen foods
Your pros could use a little uppin in a coupe categories
Try another approach home boy, you had a story
Once upon a time there were two whack rappers
Who took a shot at me with a couple knee slappers
They had a bit of talent, they were in my good favors
But they talked a lot of shit they couldn't back later
About 8 disses in they started to call it quits
When they noticed that I was toppin all their shit
So it's reasonable how, they'd have reasonable doubt
They wrote some garbage and gave themselves reason to go out
So chop this up as a loss don't even question
I'd suggest you keep it in your head instead of text and
This is my advice so don't throw your future up
Think of beef as a hot girl and you could use her up
But there's a 78% chance she'll give you aids
Follow this advice with your pen and put the dick away
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Re: The Takeover

Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 31st, '09, 07:39

James R. wrote:The takeover, I'm killin you lames hard
God MC, me, James R
Aight mother fuckers Ima finish the musical
After that it's just business as usual
Epiphany cant stick wit me he's dogged to fight
Fitting name, your good at first and gone tonight
Maybe MC's should test the waters 'fore they jump in
Let the blood hounds find the lockers you were dumped in
You gettin beat by the young'n's dog you said it yourself
So for me? Just leave your whack shit sit on the shelf
Ice Killa on some bitch shit, wit lines hoe's would use
Your CD was barely as hot as frozen foods
Your pros could use a little uppin in a coupe categories
Try another approach home boy, you had a story
Once upon a time there were two whack rappers
Who took a shot at me with a couple knee slappers
They had a bit of talent, they were in my good favors
But they talked a lot of shit they couldn't back later
About 8 disses in they started to call it quits
When they noticed that I was toppin all their shit
So it's reasonable how, they'd have reasonable doubt
They wrote some garbage and gave themselves reason to go out
So chop this up as a loss don't even question
I'd suggest you keep it in your head instead of text and
This is my advice so don't throw your future up
Think of beef as a hot girl and you could use her up
But there's a 78% chance she'll give you aids
Follow this advice with your pen and put the dick away


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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 07:47

Coleon wrote:this makes me certain, Mc Anon vs Maybe vs James R.
seriously would just bring down TR

The board would be shut down
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Requiem » Jan 31st, '09, 07:49

^ the shit was pretty hot man. love the first 6 lines. fuckin murdered it. the middle was meh, and the lines where u dissed me were decent. finished it with sick ass punchlines. nice drop man.
the whole frozen foods line can be reversed tho, like

I aint hot, i'm cold as a motha f*cka

nice shit tho.
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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 07:51

^thanks brohemian. All keystyles lol
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Requiem » Jan 31st, '09, 07:55

Chet Starr wrote:Great song, and great freestyle :y:


yea, did he bite the title of our collab chet?? :o
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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 07:58

^thanks Chet

Mufukka I aint bite shit... this another call out for beef wiigga?! Lol
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Requiem » Jan 31st, '09, 07:59

James R. wrote:^thanks Chet

Mufukka I aint bite shit... this another call out for beef wiigga?! Lol


i'm tired as shit man. but i'll rise from the dead if u wanna summons somethin. but call Maybe again, and i'll just bend over and get it over with :smoking:
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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 08:00

Lol naw man its gravy
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Slim Zaddy » Jan 31st, '09, 09:36

it's sick .. the middle lines were way above dope .. loved it James :y: :y:
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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 17:43

^Thanks bro

You missed some classic shit last night. Made the Biggie Pac beef look like child's play
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Re: The Takeover

Postby gutawafang » Jan 31st, '09, 17:52

My. This is so direct and I relate to it. Cool! :flower:
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 31st, '09, 18:07

James R. wrote:^Thanks bro

You missed some classic shit last night. Made the Biggie Pac beef look like child's play


K on one note dope diss! outta all three of you that dissed me yours was best but that is past and this ones best and that is present! Kinda funny how that works all in good fun though! But the Pac and Biggie beef they might both be dead because of it so childsplay I dunno dude, anyways as you guys would put it you smoked them! =D>
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Re: The Takeover

Postby James R. » Jan 31st, '09, 18:15

Purple23Haze wrote:
James R. wrote:^Thanks bro

You missed some classic shit last night. Made the Biggie Pac beef look like child's play


K on one note dope diss! outta all three of you that dissed me yours was best but that is past and this ones best and that is present! Kinda funny how that works all in good fun though! But the Pac and Biggie beef they might both be dead because of it so childsplay I dunno dude, anyways as you guys would put it you smoked them! =D>

Naw I was just jokin about the Big and Pac shit. I hope to never see a beef escalate to that level again, especially in music.

But thanks man, I appreciate you checkin it out.
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Re: The Takeover

Postby Purple23Haze » Jan 31st, '09, 18:16

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