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Postby Solace » Jan 31st, '09, 22:46

These lyrics are mere spirits, written on pieces of paper,
Sharp as a razor, wipe you out with ease like an eraser,
I thoroughly plan my attacks, I have lyrical tactics,
I've practiced, an ill emcee destroying the wackest,
I have classified raid blueprints, it's simply strategic,
Figure out the best ways to make people paraplegic,
It's Verbal Warfare, Me, Mr. Starr and Ice,
Don't forget the Anonymous kid spitting with spite,
So ready your army, we're sitting on our chairs waiting,
We'll verbally bomb you, y'all better start training.

Meh. :sweating:
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Postby MC Anonymous » Jan 31st, '09, 23:03

Haha I liked this. :y:
LMFAO@ Brittney, bitch looking worse than a chupacabra mixed with a broken down coyote. You're disgusting ugly, so ugly in fact, my brain simultaneously exploded while processing how bitterly grotesque you look. I would much rather stick ice picks into the walls of my cranium, then stick my dick into your quagmire of a clitoris. You're what would happen if a sperm whale mated with a Godzilla fish..


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Re: NEW - Try Us

Postby mcZu » Jan 31st, '09, 23:21

You can do better, still enjoyable.
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Re: NEW - Try Us

Postby Solace » Jan 31st, '09, 23:22

mcZu wrote:You can do better, still enjoyable.

MC Anonymous wrote:Haha I liked this. :y:


Thanks guys.
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Re: NEW - Try Us

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 1st, '09, 07:54

it's nice .. good shit :y:
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Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 19:06

z_em wrote:it's nice .. good shit :y:

Thanks bro!
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Re: NEW - Try Us

Postby Ivy » Feb 1st, '09, 21:40

Pretty basic, but you still pulled it off with style :smoking: You definetely got potential, keep flowin' and textin'...
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Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 21:49

Ivy wrote:Pretty basic, but you still pulled it off with style :smoking: You definetely got potential, keep flowin' and textin'...

Thanks, ill keep practicing ;)
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Re: NEW - Try Us

Postby Ivy » Feb 1st, '09, 21:53

Epiphany wrote:Thanks, ill keep practicing ;)


Don't worry, you're doing a lot better than I ever could now-a-days... :happy:
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Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 22:39

Ivy wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Thanks, ill keep practicing ;)


Don't worry, you're doing a lot better than I ever could now-a-days... :happy:

Thanks :happy: Not to sound cocky or anything but when im 15 i think i could be at MC Anonymous' level. :D
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