Philosophy of Life

[gutawafang]

great multis.

[Slim Zaddy]

well you have good multies as said above ,, flow was on and off , lyrically it's very good , some rhymes dont fit or dont rhyme naturally like they are forced to rhyme, , but it can be done better ,, i know that you can ,, keep writing ,, that's a real feed , if you want to get better , i can tell you that's it's dope or somethin but that will not get's you better at all .. gd here homie.. keep writing

[James R.]

The rhyme scheme was interesting in this. You didn't have many rhyme couplets which is always a risky choice, but it didn't make it any more difficult to read. The beginning to the end had an increasingly extended flow which is ok acapella (sometimes) but would be difficult to do over a beat. I didn't see many (if any) multies though. I just saw you rhyming big words, so good vocab and rhyming. Overall I liked it, but the flow was a little iffy and the rhyme scheme might not be for everyone ya know?