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"Before Hip Hop, Part I"

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"Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Wreck » Feb 1st, '09, 05:50

I wanted to do something, not only talking about some shit here and their about hip hop, but about feelings when writing it, or just some shit in general. I say Part 1 cause I have an idea to make a bunch of these songs, and then go on to record them, after writing and posting them here. Anyways...


Before Hip Hop

I snoop around, no priorities when he joined No Limit
or get numbers tossed up, when Em made "Infinite"
Glorious dreams, let your lights beam like Pac's accident
or get accepted in church, when Mase stopped rappin
a "Notorious" phene, victorious team
topped off with a little, "so much more of me"
It's fucking chemical, I drug them like chlorine
or maybe morphine, I don't know. "Good Morning!"
Brooklyn go hard, play by the rules like Ricky D
I'll have your girl screamin like Kay Slay or Dicky V
aint nothin but B.K. all day, like a Big Mac
Mark McGwire's bitch, I got big problems- where my shrink at?
I got you up in smoke, but where the hell's the cig at?
I'm ready to spit, or spit you out, where's the sink at?
Dre Day all day, that's what they told me after "Fuck Compton"
Half a dollar can't save you- why is "Buck sobbin?"
Fuck poppin, I'll cut you off and have your blood clottin
But the Candyman told me so, so don't knock and
me and my bitch have FAITH when knocking boots
So shoot, if you are a gun- I'm cocking you
anywhere, anytime, I'll share what Akon's lying
If you not in the game like EA, you in the wrong science
or in the wrong lab- like Dylan it's gone what you had
and like epiphanys you can't take it back
It's surfaced, now, blowing in the wind
Don't be afraid if you're glowing when you win
Juelz before Def Jam, Common, when he was counting change
Something special- "Pain and Glory" aint amount to pain
Gain a hundred, or play the hunter like Paul, brother
Hit the lotto, or hit the summit, before you plummit to the gutter
That's what I rummage with thoughts, punted on 4th and 1
Keep Ya Head Up, cause when it rains, it's pouring son
Hip Hop's a daily idol, image; scary, suicidal
Decisions- vital, I give 'em a "Bitch Please" like some midol
I got a "Cash Cab" for every check I cash
I put my foot down- with every step in rap
I guess I'm mad, it's the stress, I'm bad, it makes me sad
I got a pen and a pad, like for every friend that I've had
But I can't bend-no-backs, make a trend so that
people change, so I'll change me. Please know that
so I guess I'll have a heart before I go through this shit
Go to 106 and Park, before I run through the park at 1:06
So forget the topic, or even diagnostics
In with the good, out with the bad like hip hop's been
Last edited by Wreck on Feb 1st, '09, 06:00, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 05:58

Dude your doing good with multies. Keep it up, and keep practicing them. I enjoyed this piece from you, it flowed well to me, had good references, and I liked the concept, even though I don't get how this is "Before Hip Hop". :y:
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Wreck » Feb 1st, '09, 06:02

Epiphany wrote:Dude your doing good with multies. Keep it up, and keep practicing them. I enjoyed this piece from you, it flowed well to me, had good references, and I liked the concept, even though I don't get how this is "Before Hip Hop". :y:


Thanks man. I don't know. I'm thinkin the whole thing is feelings, reminiscing & commenting on shit and rapping in general. Cause I knew nothing about all this, the artists, fashion, music "before hip hop."
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Solace » Feb 1st, '09, 06:07

ShadyBaby8 wrote:
Epiphany wrote:Dude your doing good with multies. Keep it up, and keep practicing them. I enjoyed this piece from you, it flowed well to me, had good references, and I liked the concept, even though I don't get how this is "Before Hip Hop". :y:


Thanks man. I don't know. I'm thinkin the whole thing is feelings, reminiscing & commenting on shit and rapping in general. Cause I knew nothing about all this, the artists, fashion, music "before hip hop."

Oh man I see now. Thanks for the explanation, makes sense :y:
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Wreck » Feb 1st, '09, 06:08

Epiphany wrote:Oh man I see now. Thanks for the explanation, makes sense :y:


It's all good bro- my bad if the title sounded confusing haha. No problem homie.
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Wreck » Feb 2nd, '09, 18:23

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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Feb 2nd, '09, 20:12

damn good read....flowed well to me^^
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Re: "Before Hip Hop, Part I"

Postby Wreck » Feb 2nd, '09, 21:37

Thanks Chris. Good looks.
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