Slim313Shady VS z_em( Z_em won)

[Spyder]

get up ***** but you cant, go figure
when you get hit by my clinched fingers
it will be like a trigger hit-chya.
You know damn well I get this party started
I get all the honies and you just act retarted
ill steal your lunch, friends, bitch and electronics.
I'm an ill murderer, TRshady's neva herd-of-ya
hide the mudrer weapon in the furniture.
Ive seen all your raps i must say there plain,
Ive heard betta from birdman and lil wayne.
the complexity of this rap wil split you in half
not even all the kings horses and men could put u back

now u, upmost respect playa

[slimsoxshady]

to be honest with you thats very weak homes, you gotta work on your flow, punch lines and multi syllable rhymes ("likes seamen" "fights demons" "bites teeth in" kinda shit") ...in a battle you want a whoa!! kinda reaction from people, so you gotta come up with some clever lines, look at other people's drops and see how they set up punches, without talking about guns most of the time

[Slim Zaddy]

okay man ,, here people vote on this

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here i go

Ill split this Slim head, Just the words i spit can leave him dead,
don’t mess wit Z or you'll get cut with the knife like wheat bread ,
Heard bitches turn you down coz you have a smelly dick,
"he's smells like a fish, something my dog wouldn't lick,
You’re no fuckin' tornado, ya soft as fuck so just relax, son,
b'cuz ya verses are natural disasters Without the impact of one,
The Idea is that you throw your voice right across town,
So That Your Midget girlfriend can hear you so close to the ground,
My lines are always correct, like the ticks the teacher puts on my English test,
what? So you wanna inspect? Go ahead be my fuckin guest,
Ya dumb-fuck, full of shit, thinkin u lynched-me, Slim, I'll put u to the canvas faster than DaVinchi,
Don't tempt-me,I'm prone to stages of temporary insanity,While you probably still giggle every time you type profanity,

, peace man

[Spyder]

hahah that was sick shit dude, i got you winning that but... since that was my first battle wanna let me spit another verse?

[Slim Zaddy]

hahah that was sick shit dude, i got you winning that but... since that was my first battle wanna let me spit another verse?

wait bro , let's get votes on this one first

[Spyder]

hah ok

[Le Tunisien]

I vote For the Z

Nice battle though

[Slim Zaddy]

okay that's 1/ 0

[emlover07]

FLOW - z_em
STRUCTURE - slim
PUNCHES - z_em
MULTIES - slim
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - z_em
COMPLEXITY - z_em
WORDPLAY - z_em
PERSONALS - z_em

my vote for Z_EM!!! great job


"I'm prone to stages of temporary insanity,While you probably still giggle every time you type profanity, " Z_em
jaja loved this verse =]

[Slim Zaddy]

FLOW - z_em
STRUCTURE - slim
PUNCHES - z_em
MULTIES - slim
RHYMES - z_em
VOCAB - z_em
COMPLEXITY - z_em
WORDPLAY - z_em
PERSONALS - z_em

my vote for Z_EM!!! great job


"I'm prone to stages of temporary insanity,While you probably still giggle every time you type profanity, " Z_em
jaja loved this verse =]

thanks again sweety ,, still need 1 more vote though

[gutawafang]

FLOW - 313
STRUCTURE - 313
PUNCHES - z em
MULTIES - 313
RHYMES - z em
VOCAB - z em
COMPLEXITY - z em
NAMEPLAY - 313
WORDPLAY - z em
PERSONALS - z em

I guess z em won. 313, keep it up. You're great too! Make it longer dude.

[Slim Zaddy]

FLOW - 313
STRUCTURE - 313
PUNCHES - z em
MULTIES - 313
RHYMES - z em
VOCAB - z em
COMPLEXITY - z em
NAMEPLAY - 313
WORDPLAY - z em
PERSONALS - z em

I guess z em won. 313, keep it up. You're great too! Make it longer dude.

thanks bro for the vote ,, finnaly it's over,, re-edit it my buddy slim,, and write who won lol ...

[Spyder]

yea yea was my first battle lol