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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby MC Anonymous » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:10

AHAHAHHAHHA this shit is classic. 10/10 very impressive for a freestyle
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Slim Zaddy » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:15

i liked it , it's dope as a freestyle . really ,, rhymes were there, lyrics are powerfull.. you had the flow .. it's sick ,,, :y: :y:
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Steve Spag » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:16

LMAOOO.
Niceee, I loved how it flowed man, and the lines were dope as fuck, especially for a freestyle. Hot stuff man!
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby James R. » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:18

Hahahaha wow that was tight freestyle madness.

Flow was on spot, some of those punches made me lol. Even the filler lines were entertaining. Good shit man.
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Ice_Scarred » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:34

THATS OFF THE DOME??!?!?!? DAMNNN!!! You friggin murdered it dude! Wow...i wonder what the expression was of everyone who had heard it. Easily a 10/10.
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Solace » Feb 3rd, '09, 22:42

Hahaha that was great Maybe :y:
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Ka0t1c » Feb 4th, '09, 03:49

nice drop, pretty crazy rhyming stuff, i can't do it like that right now, but when i get back into tip top form... oh i can't wait

good job man :o
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '09, 04:00

old and his sex life diminished like a pastor pre-sworn..
like the pixelated penis in a Japanese porn...

respect to this man. freestyle shit. damn. =D>
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby gutawafang » Feb 4th, '09, 04:07

old and his sex life diminished like a pastor pre-sworn..
like the pixelated penis in a Japanese porn...

respect to this man. freestyle shit. damn.
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Robbie G » Feb 5th, '09, 04:10

That's pretty epic for a true freestyle. :worship:
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Re: 100 percent freestyle... SHIT!

Postby Ivy » Feb 5th, '09, 05:09

Wow, I wish I could think of shit like that off the top of my brain. If I could I'd be the most wise-ass person you'd ever meet, the kind the boys don't want to take home to mommy... :p
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