Something to Remember Me By

[Ka0t1c]

pretty good, could be better with more time and verses

[Slim Zaddy]

ya it's pretty nice i liked it .. short and sweet .. rhymes with the flow were there,, gd job here homie

[James R.]

I like this man. You could definitely add a couple divine verses and eloquent hooks and make this a pretty sick song. I liked the multies in there and you still maintained a good vocabulary. The flow was good but got stretched here:

You okay but don’t believe in the thirst, I can see that you fail
I ride like the Highwayman, in the snow, sleet or the hail
And your feet have been frail ever since you leaked on my trail
I’m immovable, a peek you can’t scale, way off in the distance
An image so pale, I could disappear in an instance

While those bars are no less good, they completely switched to a longer flow (or a faster delivery) and threw me off. But past that this is a really good piece. Seems like it's coming from a more emotional place than some of your other drops and I like that. Consider making this a full track. It's too good a verse to waste.