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[Solace]

He's just a little kid who likes to stick to youth,
Anyone who thinks otherwise has to miss a screw,
Cause this bitch will boom, whoops slip of the tooth,
Slip of the noose and he's sick in the booth,
Sipping the juice, man he's tripping on his shoes,
Heard he was dead? Well your missing the news,
Lipping the lyrics, girlfriend is bitching to you,
"Where's my present!?" it's a razor now get it smooth,
He's itching to pursue, hes kicking and you'll lose,
Kicking the goofs, Canadian sticking to truth.

edit: oh shit i just noticed i bit a rhyme off steve spag, i started the rhyme scheme from Steve's Dead Or Alive, and i rhymed the same thing (missing the news)

Sorry, you can just uh disregard that line.

[Slim Zaddy]

pretty tight bro ,, i hev seen you these times writing small pieces,, before you were writing full songs ,, so get back pal .. anyway the flow here is great ,, i can't flow with it easly ,, rhyming and lyrics were there,, its short but still nice.. gd job here shadymademe

[mcZu]

The whole good thing on this piece was the flow, that flowed fucking great. Lyrics weren't that special still enjoyable. Rhyme scheme was good though.

[Requiem]

nice piece man. it's short, but it's pretty cool. loved the flow, and even tho it's about a tough kid, it felt light hearted for some odd reason
good drop

[Solace]

Thanks all you guys, glad you liked it!

[Solace]

nice piece man. it's short, but it's pretty cool. loved the flow, and even tho it's about a tough kid, it felt light hearted for some odd reason
good drop

my feelings exactly, good job

Thanks man

[James R.]

I liked it. Actually didn't notice the line until you mentioned it and I checked lol. Nice multies though man, very cool that you kept it throughout the whole verse. Flow was there, rhyming was there. Overall good piece. There were a couple lines when I thought slight word changes could have made perfect multies, but it's no big deal for real. Good job.

[Solace]

I liked it. Actually didn't notice the line until you mentioned it and I checked lol. Nice multies though man, very cool that you kept it throughout the whole verse. Flow was there, rhyming was there. Overall good piece. There were a couple lines when I thought slight word changes could have made perfect multies, but it's no big deal for real. Good job.

Thanks James