Text Style (7 minutes)

[MC Anonymous]

I've collected bombs to protect my home
affect the zone with this damn tech I own
Blown with chrome, teary eyed and weak
I can't speak upon my own death of freaks
I'm broken and beaten, sliced with shame
all that I gained just gets diced with pain
horrid images, death tiled with footprints
my hood left, I'm stuck alone with this print
text written in stone, my life written in bone
spittin' has honed, my ability to stay alone
hear my voice, I want to die but I must stay
because to be frank, my family's trust pays
have my life, take it from my hands and guide
but to me, all thingss good turned bland and died.

[James R.]

I enjoyed this. There was a good flow, structure was solid as always. Lyrics were good even though you rhymed footprint and print which I'd advise against, but it's all good, this was damn good for 7 minutes. Aside from that rhyming faux pa I wouldn't say there's anything wrong with it. I wouldn't call it your best, but I vibed with it a lot and felt what you were saying. Kudos man.

[noel]

[Slim Zaddy]

i liked it MC .. well structured and flowed great

[gutawafang]

"have my life, take it from my hands and guide
but to me, all thingss good turned bland and died"

that hooked me. the whole song was inspirational dude. GREAT ANONYMUS!