*New Spizzy* Xclusive 16

[Speech]

so i'm back to bless tr with my presence lol....
well since i'm single again i have more time for the internet-life...which is basicly myspace and tr shady (and this other german forum where i get to know some awesome chix but lez keep that on the side)
not only that i'm giving feedback again...i request yours!!! xD
so for those who missed me (guess nobody did i checked tr on the low lol)
heres an Xclusive 16 bars recorded in the studio where i'm recording all the stuff for my projects
beat by Dj Smochi (german producer i talked to like a week ago)
http://www.zshare.net/audio/54910101f10e4bf3/
heres the link..and no its not up on myspace yet...i want to wait cuz i planed on shooting a video to it..
feed apreciated

[gutawafang]

nice one. Hi speech, Fish here. nice to meet you.

[Speech]

nice one. Hi speech, Fish here. nice to meet you.

guess i'ma just thank ya there lol...hi nice to meet ya too...damn that Leah Dizon? *googles*

[Jay-19]

Not to be an asshole or anything, but you kinda sound like every other mainstream rapper out there on this track.
It's not unique with a certain style.
Can't bitch about the flow though or anything, because you flow like a motherfucker on this one.
Rhymes are nothing extraordinary.
Since it's recorded in a studio, the quality couldn't be better, top notch man!

I give this track a 6/10, just because the fact that you sound like at least a thousand rappers out there.
Don't know though, this might be your own personal style.
I hope not, because you sure as hell got the skills to get somewhere, you just need to stand out a little more.

Just honest feed man.

[Speech]

Not to be an asshole or anything, but you kinda sound like every other mainstream rapper out there on this track.
It's not unique with a certain style.
Can't bitch about the flow though or anything, because you flow like a motherfucker on this one.
Rhymes are nothing extraordinary.
Since it's recorded in a studio, the quality couldn't be better, top notch man!

I give this track a 6/10, just because the fact that you sound like at least a thousand rappers out there.
Don't know though, this might be your own personal style.
I hope not, because you sure as hell got the skills to get somewhere, you just need to stand out a little more.

Just honest feed man.

no no haha i respect your opinion and i'm glad your being honest...love it when ppl critizize than just say "blabla its dope"
since i'm doing american rap in germany i GOTTA keep it simple with the official stuff..cuz the crowd won even understand half of what i'm saying on this simple song
ouch that hurts cuz yeah this is my style hmm xD...i been told to keep it like that so i can go somewhere but keep it real at thh same time
and any mainstream rapper?...define me that..cuz its plain to see i'm not rapping about how big my lollipop is or how high i can stack my chips (that i don even have)
again..thx for the feedback

[Jay-19]

Not to be an asshole or anything, but you kinda sound like every other mainstream rapper out there on this track.
It's not unique with a certain style.
Can't bitch about the flow though or anything, because you flow like a motherfucker on this one.
Rhymes are nothing extraordinary.
Since it's recorded in a studio, the quality couldn't be better, top notch man!

I give this track a 6/10, just because the fact that you sound like at least a thousand rappers out there.
Don't know though, this might be your own personal style.
I hope not, because you sure as hell got the skills to get somewhere, you just need to stand out a little more.

Just honest feed man.

no no haha i respect your opinion and i'm glad your being honest...love it when ppl critizize than just say "blabla its dope"
since i'm doing american rap in germany i GOTTA keep it simple with the official stuff..cuz the crowd won even understand half of what i'm saying on this simple song
ouch that hurts cuz yeah this is my style hmm xD...i been told to keep it like that so i can go somewhere but keep it real at thh same time
and any mainstream rapper?...define me that..cuz its plain to see i'm not rapping about how big my lollipop is or how high i can stack my chips (that i don even have)
again..thx for the feedback

Yeah I feel you on the part where you gotta keep it relatively simple. It's the same for me.
And about any mainstream rapper, I think you sound a lot like 50 Cent, Chamillionaire, The Game or any other big dog in the game you know. But not lyric-wise, but rather style-wise. Like you kinda have the same flow and delivery.

[Speech]

Not to be an asshole or anything, but you kinda sound like every other mainstream rapper out there on this track.
It's not unique with a certain style.
Can't bitch about the flow though or anything, because you flow like a motherfucker on this one.
Rhymes are nothing extraordinary.
Since it's recorded in a studio, the quality couldn't be better, top notch man!

I give this track a 6/10, just because the fact that you sound like at least a thousand rappers out there.
Don't know though, this might be your own personal style.
I hope not, because you sure as hell got the skills to get somewhere, you just need to stand out a little more.

Just honest feed man.

no no haha i respect your opinion and i'm glad your being honest...love it when ppl critizize than just say "blabla its dope"
since i'm doing american rap in germany i GOTTA keep it simple with the official stuff..cuz the crowd won even understand half of what i'm saying on this simple song
ouch that hurts cuz yeah this is my style hmm xD...i been told to keep it like that so i can go somewhere but keep it real at thh same time
and any mainstream rapper?...define me that..cuz its plain to see i'm not rapping about how big my lollipop is or how high i can stack my chips (that i don even have)
again..thx for the feedback

Yeah I feel you on the part where you gotta keep it relatively simple. It's the same for me.
And about any mainstream rapper, I think you sound a lot like 50 Cent, Chamillionaire, The Game or any other big dog in the game you know. But not lyric-wise, but rather style-wise. Like you kinda have the same flow and delivery.

oooooh ok i thought you compared me to completely wack rappers like weezy or boosie or something..ok now i know what your goin for...hmm well its a thing of taste...i love the way i sound (not cocky here i'm serious) and i'd lie if i say i do this hip hop thing just for the love i really want ppl to compare me to big artist(if its not weezy etc -.-) haha its more like a compliment to me when you said i sound like em plus i'm not makin money even though i sound "mainstream"...
some even told me i sound too underground but i wont turn that down cuz like you said i have a mainstream feeling to my stuff and thatz enough for now haha
thx for getting deep with this thatz what were here for

[yoshi]

Spizzy!

Hmm.. it was simple. lol @ you saying you gotta keep it simple for the german publicity HAHAHAHH it made my day *rubs it in in Chris's face
But I got the point, and since it was more like a promo track.. Guess I'll just wait for some more serious stuff One thing I absolutely loved was your flow and the quality, sounds like a pro really.

give me a free copy

[Speech]

Spizzy!

Hmm.. it was simple. lol @ you saying you gotta keep it simple for the german publicity HAHAHAHH it made my day *rubs it in in Chris's face
But I got the point, and since it was more like a promo track.. Guess I'll just wait for some more serious stuff One thing I absolutely loved was your flow and the quality, sounds like a pro really.

give me a free copy

im back!!!
thx for checkin it out..and for real yo hahaha i was at a concert of a german rapper (you might know him his name is Kool Savas) and he has an american rapper in his crew and all the peepz on the concert stopped rapping along when the guy's english verse came up...i was the only one rappin haha so i'ma keep it simple for those who cant get it straight lmao..plus i love to rhyme simple i focus on flow and delivery...*throws a free copy at yosh's head*...*when the tapes done lmao*...
apreciate the feed

[yoshi]

damn right i know Savas but i thought German peeps would dig the english verses.. anyways.. do what you think works best for you and keep it real.

*bumps All 4 One with Azad

[Speech]

damn right i know Savas but i thought German peeps would dig the english verses.. anyways.. do what you think works best for you and keep it real.

*bumps All 4 One with Azad

thx yo...(loves savas and azad's music)

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

already told ya man....i love your multies they mostly damn smooth...i think your multies are top notch (even if they are easy)...

[DelinQuent]

SPIZZY- good to see your ass back

fuck what they say about sounding mainstream, take it as a compliment. after all, if you don't at least sound a bit mainstream, you'll never go anywhere. i dont me sound mainstream as in sound like other rappers. spizzy sounds mainstream, but i dont think he sounds like anyone else.

now, verse is sick, love your rhymes as usual. good multies. great flow.

spizzy, i'm pretty sure youre the only rapper on here who's songs i can listen to more than once. good shit man.

[Speech]

thx chris yo you get all my new shit patner haha

@ DQ : thx for the back up..yeah i take it as a compliment for real...feel ya on everything your saying about the mainstream thing...glad you liked it...thatz what i'm makin music for..for ppl to not just listen and delete...i want em to listen to a song at least twice and enjoy (whether its a complex verse or not)

peace

[Boston]

for a german dude, you have no accent, and you sound just as american as a motherfucker growin up round here. its only a 16 but i cant complain, thats what i usually be doing to. i seen you said you was going to shoot a video for it? i would finish the song then. but now to the actual feed

like i said you sound like an american, but listening to your shit before and you telling me, you told me you was german. the beat is straight bumping, something i could rip up. the flow is pure, no flaws i can find, and its not normal/basic/choppy. i love the multi's, i use them a lot myself. the lyrics are simple like people said but nothing wrong with that, there are many people (even commercial rappers) who have simple lyrics, but has to do a lot with flow and the beat so it sounds good (not taking away from you) the delivery is there. it sends off a nice vibe. i think a lot of people are saying you sound mainstream is because of the beat itself, it has a lot to do with the beats you choose. just throwing that out there.

and you said you dumbed down your lyrics because the germans wouldn't like it or understand it and all that. well if your just going to do your thing local and all that, keep doing ya thing. but when you come on here you go to realize people are from all around the world, and if you want to reach a wider audience you have to take chances. but regardless your shit sounds dope, and one of the best tracks ive heard on here recently. everything seems good, no complaints from me, just trying to give some advice n shit.

keep it up.

check out my new track if you can..well my 16. ha

http://www.forum.trshady.com/viewtopic.php?f=38&t=53957