Battle Tested

[Rain Matrix]

I'm standing at the Gates of Hades like an angel ready for War
the look on my Face is Shady and I'm about to knock on the Door

my Minds being Attacked but on the surface I remain Calm
these Rhymes help me Relax when I don't feel so Strong

I can't be Weak Today cuz my son is counting on his Daddy
fuck what those People Say my little clone makes me Happy

his Smile is my Hope and with all my love I will not let Him Down
my Style remains Dope regardless of whatever the devil Brings Now

Pain reminds us that were Real and so that must be why I'm Hurting
Rain can't describe how he Feels because his future is so Uncertain

these Demons take their Best Shot but I am still Standing After
the Reason is my Wrecked Thoughts still aren't Planning Backwords

it's an Operation and the Doctors Waiting to sew my Heart Up
I won't Bother Saying that this Father's Aching cuz it's so Hard Ta

no Wall could ever Block Me I am sprinting forward toward the End
this Fall broke my Body but somehow I'm still able to Commence

[gutawafang]

good way of arranging as usual man. Makes it easy to read. Nice vocabulary dude.

Favourite:Pain reminds us that were Real and so that must be why I'm Hurting
Rain can't describe how he Feels because his future is so Uncertain

[Slim Zaddy]

this is dope bro ., you have many lines which are sick ,, good vocab and rhymes ,, the flow is sick as usual ,, keep droppin Rain ,,

[James R.]

Damn man seems like you're goin through some shit. I hope it all works out as best it can.

As for the piece itself I liked it. It was interesting how you you had most of your multies as internal rhymes. It made it a pretty cool read. The flow was a little stretched in the middle of it, but it's all good. Nice drop man.

[mcZu]

Damn bro, I liked this one. I can relate to it alott, hope everything works our for ya bro.
As for the lyrics, flow was superb, rhym-scheme was great. Especially the flow, it flowed perfect. Your words were pretty vivid, jumped out and painted a pretty clear picture but yet the mind stayed curious enough and eager to read the next line. Goodjob on that man, glad to see you back and dropping