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Le vs Coleon

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 8th, '09, 21:31

Ok , U should feel this :angry:


im tired of what you call-good-try
i dont think you all-should-lie
i wont give a fuk but that coleon boy-could-die
i wont begg for vote,or LOL-would-i buy
i know you note and fkn quote,stop the fkn foolish pride
the shet i wrote, wont worth shet cuz y all in that boogish boy-side
i would continue my road,i wont give up or fkn Hide cuz im a fighter inside
coleona we dont care about the vote you bought,me i fought and ought to fuk u up in sight


vote for me or against me to tell me good try :(
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Re: Le vs Coleon

Postby Requiem » Feb 8th, '09, 21:43

^lmao at the canibus line.

Structure- Coleon
Rhymes- Le
Flow-Coleon
Complexity- Tie
Nameplay- Coleon
Multies- Le



i think Coleon won this. good try le, no but seriously. ur multies were sick. but the structure and flow as off :sweating:
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Re: Le vs Coleon

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 8th, '09, 22:26

Ice Killa wrote:^lmao at the canibus line.

Structure- Coleon
Rhymes- Le
Flow-Coleon
Complexity- Tie
Nameplay- Coleon
Multies- Le



i think Coleon won this. good try le, no but seriously. ur multies were sick. but the structure and flow as off :sweating:

this was just to express that i been Battling and loosing but still trying not givin up untill i win one time at least cuz i know what i write can beat coleon
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Re: Le vs Coleon

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 8th, '09, 22:31

I KNOW IM GONNA GET SOME VOTES THIS TIME :p :unsure: :flower:
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Re: Le vs Coleon

Postby James R. » Feb 8th, '09, 22:34

Coleon took this, but Le, man this is what Im talking about. I aint mean to come so hard at you before, but when you battle people that are still relatively new you get a chance to grow and this is MUCH MUCH MUCH better than your original shit. Good job man. Some really nice multies in there, but the flow and structure were just not there. Punches were decent, but Coleon had better ones. Keep practicing. And seriously... drop shit in creative writing man It WILL help
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Re: Le vs Coleon

Postby Le Tunisien » Feb 8th, '09, 22:50

James R. wrote:Coleon took this, but Le, man this is what Im talking about. I aint mean to come so hard at you before, but when you battle people that are still relatively new you get a chance to grow and this is MUCH MUCH MUCH better than your original shit. Good job man. Some really nice multies in there, but the flow and structure were just not there. Punches were decent, but Coleon had better ones. Keep practicing. And seriously... drop shit in creative writing man It WILL help

maaaaaan Just Vote for me or against me dont tell me good try :( im tired of that :unsure:
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