The Route I Chose

by **Ka0t1c** » Mar 16th, '09, 05:47

i chose this life, nobody told me how to arrive at all
and i rose from the nose dive from a long fall
to get closer to my goals by risin - i know that somehow
my future's over the horizon and it calls for more surprises so i'll
survive thru time my own war
i recognize i shouldn't snore like i've done before
cuz now i realize i've become wiser, why would i hide - am i poor
or could i try to absorb the moral fibers and restore
my mind to transform my cypher back to the norm
rather than psycho, let me brainstorm for
a better perspective, instead of ignore
my head, respect my uniform til i'm expired
cuz i am inspired by something higher which i've acquired
by supplyin my side of the story to guide you to glory

by **Slim Zaddy** » Mar 16th, '09, 18:55

i liked it man ,, you had some sick lines ,, content was okay, you got the emotions ,, not your best but i still enjoyed it :y:

by **Arabian Shady** » Mar 16th, '09, 20:22

good use of multis on this 1 B, the whole thing made sense :shifty:

flow was kool, no problem with it, glad you droped the 4 word/bar structure,lol, makes it easier to read
nice read man, good drop

by **Ka0t1c** » Mar 16th, '09, 22:32

thanx u two, i admit it isn't my best piece, my mind is somewhere else lately... also, i need to find more words to describe my situation right now, this is like a daily exercise to keep me going thru the day