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BigBuck92 (still workin on it)

Postby bigbuck92 » Mar 16th, '09, 21:20

i'm new to the site, n this is jst sumin i rote now, duno how good it is, but fuck it

Bowl into the club while I’m ecstatied up/
Tie up and gag the band and chuck ‘em in the back o’ the truck/
Get up, take it from where they left it and pick the shit up/
Hook me up to the speaker, and let me crank this shit up/
Plug me in at the bass and let music run through my veins/
And if I’m lucky somethin’ in the waves may kick start my brain/
Coz I need somethin’ to thrill me, and I don’t care if it kills me/
Just ran a thousand volts straight through my heart to see if it still beats/
Why’s everybody lookin’ at me like I’m out my mind?/
Oh the gun? I’m not gonna shoot nobody, just killin’ time/
Until I finally get signed and I can finally breathe/
Like when I stop seein’ Jade Goodie’s mug on OK magazine/
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Re: BigBuck92 (still workin on it)

Postby tjb » Mar 16th, '09, 21:37

u gotta feed other people for them to feed you
flow changed throughout the thing bro
pick this shit up
crank tht shit up
? tht wasnt cool
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Re: BigBuck92 (still workin on it)

Postby bigbuck92 » Mar 16th, '09, 22:00

ok m8, thanks for the reply, and thanks for the advice
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