rap is boring? quick freestyle

[bigbuck92]

Rap is startin' to lose it's touch, so i'm here to preserve it/
And i'm here to dish the shit out, to those who deserve it/
When I got somethin' to say it always comes out and rhymes/
That's why I never have a problem fillin' every line/
Watch me as I pour it and you'll see I'm just like a wine/
Not just cos' o' how i flow, but i get better with time/
Not like all these other rappers, i'm the kind you rewind/
I'm like a cocktail of every one o' the greats intertwined/

a bit shit (sorry) but i dun it quickly

i saw a topic about how rap was boring?? and yeh this is what i came up with there and then??

any good?

[bigbuck92]

no sorry, i'm new, i just herd sum1 say it, i didn't know where to post it,
sorry again :S

[Solace]

lol you dont have to bold the rhymes, im sure we arent braindead. It was good for a freestyle. Peace man looking forward to future drops from you.

[bigbuck92]

lol you dont have to bold the rhymes, im sure we arent braindead. It was good for a freestyle. Peace man looking forward to future drops from you.

thanks m8

[gutawafang]

lol you dont have to bold the rhymes, im sure we arent braindead. It was good for a freestyle. Peace man looking forward to future drops from you.

[Slim Zaddy]

good freestyle ,,