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as the world blazes

Postby bigbuck92 » Mar 16th, '09, 22:16

That what people don’t understand, they can’t appreciate/
And it don’t matter how hard they try ‘coz they’ll never infiltrate/
Under my skin, stick out like a sore thumb everywhere I go/
But still nobody ever sees me anywhere I go/
Like the path of life, it just keeps movin’ to and fro/
And I’m at the back in the back seat, watchin’ as we go/
Starin’ out the window taking in the blue sky and the grass/
When in reality I just wanna smash my head through this fuckin’ glass/
Tear my face apart so I can see how much it bleeds/
To see if it flushes out the anger on the way as it leaves/
My spirits are fall, and my patience dyin’ out like leaves/
‘Ent no winter wonderland, so cold I could ice over the seas/
Ice over the seas and kill anythin’ in it/
My words so full of frost, they cut my lips as I sing it/
But then it burns like fire every time that I bring it/
Now I’m gonna blaze up the whole fuckin’ world with Him as my witness/

They say the only person who I gotta beat is myself/
But it seems to me it’s me V the rest of the fuckin’ world/
Back me up into the corner, won’t react till I oughta –
But when I’m clamped like a pearl, I’ll let all the range unfurl/
And you’ll all suffer the brunt of it, like a punch when a boxer hits/
Like the force of the blow when Tyson up and he thumped his bitch/
The whole world must o’ trembled at the force when he struck his bitch/
Now the world’s gonna tremble again, but this time I’m’a finish it/
I’ll show no mercy, I’ll show no sympathy/
When you say ‘mercy please’, I’ll show no empathy/
‘Coz you helped empty me, and then you buried me/
How can I influence you when I don’t exist as an entity?/
Where’s my identity? What have you done to me?/
We’re worlds apart, I’m like an alien, inter-planetary/
Should I colonize or should I make up for our difference?/
Or should I blaze up the whole fuckin’ world with Him as my witness?/

Feels like my balls are bein’ held over a fire/
Like the flames are licking under me, but I’m just that much higher/
My pants may be smoking but I’m not a fucking liar/
All I’m speakin’ is the truth that’s why it hurts as it bites ya/
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I know how far I’ve fallen when the music leaves my side/
But it won’t be gone for long coz it needs me as much as I-/
-Need it, and as low I may be feelin’, It’s all you fuckers that feed it/
It’s like a spawn of all this hatred, as if you fuckin’ breed it/
So I swallow it down like a pill with a bit of blood to rinse it/
And then I wipe it off my mouth with a grimace/
And I’ll use it to blaze up the whole fuckin’ world with Him as my witness/

something i rote and recorded this a while ago, again, i don't know how good it is, just may as wel put it up
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Re: as the world blazes

Postby gutawafang » Mar 17th, '09, 06:14

Good shit dude. Flow's good. Rhymes good. Keep it up! :happy:
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Re: as the world blazes

Postby Slim Zaddy » Mar 17th, '09, 09:48

good shit man , flow was off and on to me , i liked the content , you had some good lines there and some are just whack , rhymes were not great but good .. you keep it tight as well . gd drop man :y:
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Re: as the world blazes

Postby bigbuck92 » Mar 17th, '09, 18:07

gutawafang wrote:Good shit dude. Flow's good. Rhymes good. Keep it up! :happy:

thanks a lot m8 :y:
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Re: as the world blazes

Postby bigbuck92 » Mar 17th, '09, 18:08

Slim Zaddy wrote:good shit man , flow was off and on to me , i liked the content , you had some good lines there and some are just whack , rhymes were not great but good .. you keep it tight as well . gd drop man :y:

cheers m8, n thanks 4 the advice aswel
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